唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

範例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I'm not very good at it. However, I love listening to songs repeatedly because music helps me relax.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid awkward phrasing and be specific about your interest in learning to sing.

範例: No, I have never had the chance to learn singing. However, if I had free time, I would love to take lessons to learn proper techniques and improve my voice.

建議: Make your answer more fluent by combining sentences and using linking words. Be specific and avoid repetition to improve clarity.

範例: If I get the chance to learn singing in the future, I would like to sing a romantic song for my husband because he is very close to me.

建議: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons or examples.

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and share their feelings with others, which can be very uplifting.

× No to be honestly I'm not a good singer and I don't like singing and there is a note I'm when I just sing song for anyone or for myself.

✓ No, to be honest, I'm not a good singer and I don't like singing, and there is a note when I just sing a song for anyone or for myself.

The phrase 'to be honestly' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'to be honest'. Also, 'there is a note I'm when I just sing song' is unclear and likely a misuse of prepositions and phrasing. It should be 'there is a note when I just sing a song'. Additionally, 'sing song' needs the article 'a' before 'song'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But yes I love to listen songs so many times.

✓ But yes, I love to listen to songs many times.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Also, 'so many times' is better expressed as 'many times' in this context. The phrase 'listen songs' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to songs'.

× No, in my life I didn't get any chance to learn how to sing but if I would get any chance or a free time just to learn how to singing then it's the best time for me and I love to learn that.

✓ No, in my life I haven't gotten any chance to learn how to sing, but if I got any chance or free time just to learn how to sing, then it would be the best time for me and I would love to learn that.

The sentence mixes past and conditional tenses incorrectly. 'Didn't get' is simple past, but the context suggests present perfect 'haven't gotten' to indicate experience up to now. 'If I would get' is incorrect; the correct conditional form is 'if I got'. Also, 'learn how to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'learn how to sing' because 'to' is followed by the base verb form.

× Tips and techniques to how to sing songs.

✓ Tips and techniques on how to sing songs.

The phrase 'tips and techniques to how to sing' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to advice or methods about something. Also, 'to how to' is redundant; it should be 'on how to'.

× If I have any have any chance in the future to learn singing and after that I would like to sing one song for my husband because he's very. Close. Just person to me and I just want to sing a romantic song. Romantic song for him.

✓ If I have any chance in the future to learn singing, after that I would like to sing one song for my husband because he's a very close person to me and I just want to sing a romantic song for him.

The phrase 'any have any chance' is redundant; one 'any' is enough. 'He's very. Close. Just person to me' is fragmented and missing the article 'a' before 'very close person'. Also, 'just person' should be 'close person'. The sentence is corrected for singular/plural and article usage and sentence structure.

× Singing is a kind of blessing for people and who just knows how to sing.

✓ Singing is a kind of blessing for people who know how to sing.

The phrase 'and who just knows how to sing' is incorrect because 'who' is a relative pronoun and should directly relate to 'people'. Also, 'just knows' is awkward here; 'know' agrees with plural 'people'. The sentence is corrected to properly connect the relative clause and subject-verb agreement.

× That person is very interesting person and they know how to share their feelings through songs and through he knows how to express their emotions through songs.

✓ That person is a very interesting person and they know how to share their feelings through songs and they know how to express their emotions through songs.

The phrase 'through he knows how to express' is incorrect; 'he' should be 'they' to agree with the plural pronoun used earlier. Also, 'interesting person' needs the article 'a'. The sentence is corrected for pronoun consistency and article usage.