唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

範例: I don't like singing because I don't have a good voice. Also, I feel very shy when I sing in front of others, so I prefer not to sing publicly.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地回答问题。

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not interested. As I mentioned, I don't have a good voice, so I prefer not to sing alone or with others.

建議: 回答表达了情感，但语法和词汇使用不准确。建议使用正确的动词形式和更自然的表达方式，增加细节使回答更具体。

範例: I would like to sing for my mother because she takes good care of me every day. Singing a song for her would be a way to show my appreciation for her love and support.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的句子结构和词汇，清楚表达观点。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music has amazing power. When people listen to music, their mood can improve significantly compared to when they don't listen to it.

× I don't like singing because I don't have a beautiful voice, so I don't have been love competence to saying.

✓ I don't like singing because I don't have a beautiful voice, so I don't have the ability to sing well.

原句中“to saying”用法错误，动词不定式后应接动词原形，且表达能力时应使用“ability to do something”。建议用“ability to sing well”替代。

× Especially I'm feel very shy before people so I cannot saying to other people publicly.

✓ Especially, I feel very shy in front of people, so I cannot sing to other people publicly.

“I'm feel”中“am”与“feel”同时出现，动词重复，应去掉“am”。“before people”应为“in front of people”。“cannot saying”错误，动词后应接原形，改为“cannot sing”。

× No, I didn't learn how to saying because I'm not interested in singing.

✓ No, I didn't learn how to sing because I'm not interested in singing.

“to saying”错误，动词不定式后应接动词原形，改为“to sing”。

× As I said before, I don't have a beautiful voice so I'm just don't wanna say into other peoples or along.

✓ As I said before, I don't have a beautiful voice, so I just don't want to sing to other people or alone.

“I'm just don't wanna”结构错误，应为“I just don't want to”。“say into other peoples”错误，动词应为“sing to other people”，“peoples”复数形式错误，应为“people”。“along”应为“alone”。

× I want to saying for my mother because my mother will love me.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because my mother loves me.

“to saying”错误，动词不定式后应接动词原形，改为“to sing”。“will love me”表达未来时不合适，母亲爱是现在事实，改为“loves me”。

× She take cares me a lot in ordinary life so I would like to sing a song to her for praising her effort for taking care of me.

✓ She takes care of me a lot in daily life, so I would like to sing a song to her to praise her efforts in taking care of me.

“take cares me”错误，正确表达为“takes care of me”。“ordinary life”用词不当，改为“daily life”。“for praising her effort for taking care of me”结构不自然，改为“to praise her efforts in taking care of me”。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music has a really amazing power.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music has really amazing power.

“a really amazing power”中“power”不可数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，应去掉。

× When people listen to music that brings stay is totally different when they're not listened to.

✓ When people listen to music, their mood is totally different compared to when they don't listen to it.

原句“that brings stay”表达不清且语法错误，应改为“their mood is totally different”。“they're not listened to”被动语态错误，改为主动语态“they don't listen to it”。