唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, có cấu trúc rõ ràng. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó dùng liên từ để nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a long day. For example, I often sing in the bathroom when I feel stressed, which makes me feel better emotionally.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích rõ ràng lý do, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu ngắn gọn.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I enjoy singing as a hobby and haven't felt the need to learn formally.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

範例: I want to sing for my mom because I feel comfortable around her. She always supports me and gives me confidence to sing in public.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and relax. For instance, singing can help reduce stress and improve mood.

× Yes, I really love singing because like I'm the kind of person who are really interested in music so that I tend to sing when I have a bad when I go to the bathroom and also is helped me to be like radio thread after a long day at school work because when things about things like emotional or maybe some.

✓ Yes, I really love singing because I'm the kind of person who is really interested in music so I tend to sing when I have a bad day or when I go to the bathroom and also it helps me to be like relaxed after a long day at school or work because of things like emotions or maybe some other reasons.

The subject 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'is helped me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me'. The sentence also had unclear parts which were corrected for clarity.

× No, actually I'm the kind of person who are really love to sing but don't spend any money or time on study how to sing because it's just my habit and I don't want to start it.

✓ No, actually I'm the kind of person who really loves to sing but doesn't spend any money or time studying how to sing because it's just my habit and I don't want to start it.

The subject 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' instead of 'love'. Also, 'don't' should be 'doesn't' to agree with singular subject. 'on study' should be 'studying' to use the correct verb form after a preposition.

× I think it's my mom because I felt really confortable when I stay with her so that I cannot be erased or shine when I sing in the public. An also she's always like sure me and she gave me like a brave and strong when I can see.

✓ I think it's my mom because I feel really comfortable when I stay with her so I cannot be embarrassed or shy when I sing in public. Also, she's always supportive and she gives me bravery and strength when I can see her.

The verb tense should be present 'feel' to match the context. 'confortable' is misspelled as 'comfortable'. 'cannot be erased or shine' is incorrect; it should be 'cannot be embarrassed or shy'. 'like sure me' is unclear and corrected to 'supportive'. 'gave me like a brave and strong' corrected to 'gives me bravery and strength'.

× Yes, because singing is the way for people to express their filling an their emotions so that when they think they can like they can unwind or let their hair down also is going to have them to reduce their threat. An is a really good way for people to take into the habit of singing.

✓ Yes, because singing is a way for people to express their feelings and their emotions so that when they think, they can unwind or let their hair down. It also helps them to reduce their stress. It is a really good way for people to develop the habit of singing.

'the way for people' should be 'a way for people'. 'filling' is incorrect, should be 'feelings'. 'have them to reduce their threat' is incorrect, should be 'helps them to reduce their stress'. 'take into the habit' is incorrect, should be 'develop the habit'.