唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and lacks fluency. Try to use correct grammar and more natural phrasing, for example, say "because" instead of "becauses" and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: I don't enjoy singing because I'm not confident in my voice. Instead, I prefer listening to music, which I find more relaxing.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and has grammatical mistakes. Use complete sentences and correct verb tenses. Also, avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily. Try to link your ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing. I have always preferred listening to music rather than singing myself.

建議: Your answer is unclear and disjointed. Try to organise your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid short, incomplete sentences. Express your ideas more naturally and fluently.

範例: Actually, I don't usually like singing, but if I had to sing, I would choose to sing for my friends because it's fun and they always support me.

建議: Your answer shows good ideas but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, try to link your ideas logically and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and helps to relieve stress. Therefore, it is a fun and enjoyable activity.

× I don't like singing becauses I'm not confident with that.

✓ I don't like singing because I'm not confident with it.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'with that' is better expressed as 'with it' to refer to singing more naturally.

× I like to listen to music instead of singing.

✓ I like listening to music instead of singing.

After 'like', the gerund form 'listening' is more natural than the infinitive 'to listen' when expressing preferences.

× No, I never learn how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learnt how to sing.

The present perfect tense 'have never learnt' is appropriate here to indicate an experience up to now. Also, 'learnt' is the past participle of 'learn' in British English.

× Before. I prefer. Listening to the music instead of singing.

✓ Before, I preferred listening to music instead of singing.

The sentence fragments need to be combined into a complete sentence. Also, 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match 'before'. 'The' before 'music' is unnecessary.

× Actually I don't like this. Sing that if yes, I want to sing for my friends because it's very fun and I'm enjoying it.

✓ Actually, I don't like singing. But if I do, I want to sing for my friends because it's very fun and I enjoy it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Sing that if yes' is incorrect and replaced with 'But if I do'. 'I'm enjoying it' is better as 'I enjoy it' for general statements.

× They will give me. Support. Yeah.

✓ They will give me support, yeah.

The sentence fragments should be combined into one sentence for clarity and correctness.

× Yeah, sure. I think singing can bring happiness to people. This is is becauses it can when I'm seeing I can express my emotions.

✓ Yeah, sure. I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I'm singing, I can express my emotions.

'This is is becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'When I'm seeing' is a typo and should be 'when I'm singing'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× And also. Maybe release the stress so I think there is a fun activity.

✓ Also, it may help release stress, so I think it is a fun activity.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to a complete sentence with proper structure and grammar.