唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain when and why you like singing.

範例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax. I often sing solo songs when I am cooking or doing laundry. Singing refreshes my mind and makes me feel happy.

建議: Your answer has many unclear words and incomplete sentences. Please focus on clear pronunciation and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain how you learnt singing and how it helped you. Avoid irrelevant words and be specific.

範例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned by listening to songs and watching music programs on TV. I try to remember the lyrics and practice singing alone. This method has helped me improve my singing skills.

建議: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to explain who you sing for and why. Be specific about your feelings and the purpose of singing for others.

範例: I often sing songs dedicated to my loved ones, especially my husband and kids. When I am happy, I express my feelings through singing as a way to show appreciation to those who support me.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by unclear sentence structure and redundancy. Try to express your opinion clearly with logical linking words. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your view.

範例: I believe singing can bring happiness to people because when we dedicate loving and appreciative lyrics to someone, it makes them feel valued. This happiness can positively change their mood and strengthen relationships.

× I love singing language often you and I'm in my free time.

✓ I love singing often in my free time.

The adverb 'often' is misplaced and the phrase 'language often you' is incorrect and unclear. The correct placement of 'often' is before the verb phrase 'in my free time' to indicate frequency. The sentence should be simplified for clarity.

× I often seen solo songs or whenever I'm doing cooking are doing my laundry work.

✓ I often sing solo songs or whenever I'm cooking or doing my laundry work.

The verb 'seen' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sing'. Also, 'doing cooking' should be 'cooking' and 'are doing' should be 'or doing'. The sentence needs present tense verbs to match the context.

× I usually sing songs and and it feels it feels so good when I stream it refresh my mind.

✓ I usually sing songs and it feels so good when I sing; it refreshes my mind.

The sentence has repeated words 'and and' and 'it feels it feels'. Also, 'stream' is incorrect; it should be 'sing'. The verb 'refresh' should be 'refreshes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I've never taken any formal swimming lessons or bunt by I've learned by listening to redo or watching music programs on TV.

✓ I've never taken any formal singing lessons, but I've learned by listening to radio or watching music programs on TV.

The word 'bunt' is incorrect; it should be 'but'. 'Swimming' should be 'singing' to match context. 'Redo' should be 'radio'. The sentence requires past participle 'taken' and present perfect 'have learned' which are correct.

× I usually try to remember the lyrics of my favorite soccer practice again alone.

✓ I usually try to remember the lyrics of my favorite songs and practice again alone.

The word 'soccer' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'songs'. The sentence structure is awkward; adding 'and' clarifies the meaning. 'Practice again alone' is correct.

× This says thought method has helped me improve my.

✓ This method has helped me improve my singing.

The phrase 'says thought method' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'this method'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'singing' completes the thought.

× Oftenly I sing songs and dedicated to my favorite persons or whenever I'm in a happy mood I dedicate my song to my husband and my kids.

✓ I often sing songs and dedicate them to my favorite people, or whenever I'm in a happy mood, I dedicate my songs to my husband and my kids.

The adverb 'Oftenly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'often'. 'Dedicated' should be 'dedicate' to match present tense. 'Persons' is better replaced with 'people'. The sentence is improved by adding commas for clarity.

× And singing is the type of upper, that kind of appreciation I give to the person who helped me in.

✓ Singing is a type of offering, a kind of appreciation I give to the person who helped me.

The word 'upper' is incorrect; it should be 'offering'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'in'; it should be completed or removed. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I fully believe that singing can bring more happiness to people because if we dedicate some.

✓ I fully believe that singing can bring more happiness to people because if we dedicate some lovable lyrics or appreciative words to any person,

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'lovable lyrics or appreciative words to any person' completes the thought.

× Lovable lyrics on appreciating lyrics to any person.

✓ lovable or appreciative lyrics to any person.

The phrase 'on appreciating lyrics' is incorrect; it should be 'or appreciative lyrics' to convey the intended meaning.

× Definitely he will become happy and he will they will cherish.

✓ Definitely, they will become happy and cherish it.

The pronouns 'he' and 'they' are mixed incorrectly. Using 'they' consistently is better for general statements. The verb 'cherish' needs an object; 'it' refers to the lyrics or appreciation.

× If we make them happy, they will change.

✓ If we make them happy, their lives will change.

The sentence is vague; adding 'their lives' clarifies what will change, improving sentence structure and meaning.