唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有多处发音和用词错误，导致表达不清晰。建议注意发音，尤其是“singing”，并且回答时要直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，避免重复和不连贯。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my imagination and helps me improve my vocal skills.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用正确的时态和句型，清楚说明是否参加过正式的唱歌课程。

範例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I learned some singing techniques in my music class at school.

建議: 回答结构不清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议先直接回答问题，然后用连词补充原因，表达更连贯。

範例: I don't have a specific person to sing for. I just enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions. It's more of a hobby than a performance for me.

建議: 回答中发音错误影响理解，且观点表达不够完整。建议注意发音，扩展观点，说明为什么唱歌能给自己和别人带来快乐。

範例: I think singing can bring happiness to the singer because it expresses emotions, and it can also make the audience feel joyful and relaxed.

× I like seeing because I think seeing us away, for me to profile my imagination and for me to improve my singing skills.

✓ I like singing because I think singing is a way for me to express my imagination and to improve my singing skills.

这里的动词应该用动名词形式'singing'，而不是'seeing'。'Seeing'是'看见'的意思，和句意不符。动名词用来表示喜欢的动作。

× I've never go out and have a class and have a singing class, but I have learned seeing in the music class.

✓ I've never gone out to have a singing class, but I have learned singing in the music class.

这里使用现在完成时，动词go的过去分词是'gone'，不能用原形'go'。另外，'learned seeing'应改为'learned singing'，动名词形式。

× I don't have a go of who do I want to sing for but I just want to sing and because I think singing is a way for me to express my emotions.

✓ I don't have a goal of who I want to sing for, but I just want to sing because I think singing is a way for me to express my emotions.

'go'应为'goal'，表示目标。'who do I want to sing for'的语序错误，陈述句应为'who I want to sing for'。

× So as just a hobby but not a performance.

✓ So it's just a hobby, not a performance.

句子缺少主语和谓语，'as'用法错误，应改为'it's'表示这是一个爱好。

× I think seeing can bring happiness to the one, to the singer, but not the audience.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to the singer, but not to the audience.

'seeing'应为'singing'，动名词形式表示唱歌这件事。并且句子中应加上'to'来连接宾语。