唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，导致表达不清晰。建议你使用简单且正确的句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体的理由支持。例如，可以说“I don't like singing because I am not good at it, and my friends often say so.”

範例: I don't like singing because I am not good at it, and my friends often say so. However, I enjoy other activities where I can express myself better.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚表达学习唱歌的经历。例如：“Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. In secondary school, I had music classes where the teacher taught us singing, but I was not very good at it.”

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. In secondary school, I had music classes where the teacher taught us singing, but I was not very good at it.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议直接回答并用具体原因支持，注意时态和词汇准确。例如：“I want to sing for my parents and family because they are supportive and won't laugh at me if I sing badly.”

範例: I want to sing for my parents and family because they are supportive and won't laugh at me if I sing badly.

建議: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并给出具体理由。例如：“Of course, singing can bring happiness because music can lift people's mood. I feel happy when I listen to songs.”

範例: Of course, singing can bring happiness because music can lift people's mood. I feel happy when I listen to songs.

× I don't like saying because I think I was bad of seeing in my friends always said that.

✓ I don't like singing because I think I was bad at singing; my friends always said that.

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used instead of 'sing' in the -ing form. Also, the preposition 'of' is incorrect here; it should be 'at' to indicate ability. The sentence needed correction to use the correct verb form and preposition.

× I have a lot of good parts of myself but seeing was really bad.

✓ I have a lot of good qualities, but singing was really bad.

The phrase 'good parts of myself' is unnatural; 'good qualities' is more appropriate. Also, 'seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. The preposition 'of' is unnecessary here.

× Yes, I learn how do you saying why was a child like in my secondary school I have the music class and my teacher teach us how to sing but I was really bad on it.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. In my secondary school, I had music class and my teacher taught us how to sing, but I was really bad at it.

The verbs 'learn' and 'teach' should be in past tense 'learned' and 'taught' to match the past time frame. The phrase 'how do you saying why' is incorrect and should be 'how to sing'. The preposition 'on' should be 'at'.

× I want to sing for my parents or my family because they won't laugh at me when I was saying bad.

✓ I want to sing for my parents or my family because they won't laugh at me when I sing badly.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used as 'saying'. The tense should be present 'sing' to match 'won't laugh'. The adverb 'bad' should be 'badly' to modify the verb 'sing'.

× If I seem to my friends, maybe they will love me.

✓ If I sing to my friends, maybe they will love me.

The verb 'seem' is incorrect here; it should be 'sing'. The preposition 'to' is necessary after 'sing' when indicating the audience.

× Of course, saying can bring happiness to people because they have a lot of senior and I also have, I don't know, I've seen it.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because they have a lot of joy and I also have, I don't know, I've seen it.

The verb 'saying' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. The word 'senior' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'joy' or 'pleasure'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs clarification.

× He's in sounds can make me really happy.

✓ These sounds can make me really happy.

The phrase 'He's in sounds' is incorrect. It should be 'These sounds' to refer to the sounds that bring happiness.