唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct grammar, avoid repetition, and make your sentences more natural and concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't really like singing because I lack confidence in my vocal skills. For instance, when I sang in front of my family, they often suggested I improve my timing, which made me hesitant to sing more.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use simpler and clearer sentences, and avoid repeating ideas. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: As I said before, I have never been interested in singing, so I haven't learned any vocal skills or performed before. However, I might consider learning in the future.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting sentence structure and punctuation. Also, try to combine sentences using linking words to make your response more fluent.

範例: If I get a chance to perform, I would definitely sing for my mother because she encourages me a lot and her love for me is unconditional. Therefore, I would prefer to perform for her one day.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate linking words. Also, avoid vague expressions and be more specific.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. For example, dedicating a song to someone can touch their heart and make them feel special.

× I don't think I have a good vocal skills

✓ I don't think I have good vocal skills

The word 'skills' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× when I used to sing song in front of my family member

✓ when I used to sing songs in front of my family members

Both 'song' and 'family member' should be plural to match the context of multiple songs and multiple family members.

× they only gave me suggestions to know to sync

✓ they only gave me suggestions on how to sing in sync

The phrase 'suggestions to know to sync' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' and the phrase should be 'how to sing in sync' to convey the intended meaning.

× I don't give a chance on learning about the vocal skills

✓ I don't give a chance to learn about vocal skills

The correct preposition after 'give a chance' is 'to' followed by the base verb 'learn'. Also, 'vocal skills' does not need 'the' here.

× maybe in future I can give a thought on it

✓ maybe in the future I can give it some thought

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future'. Also, 'give a thought on it' is better expressed as 'give it some thought'.

× so I would prefer to. Perform for her one day

✓ so I would prefer to perform for her one day

The sentence is broken incorrectly by a period. 'Perform' should continue the sentence without a period.

× An according to mean dedicating a song or performing a song for someone can might make him emotion

✓ According to me, dedicating or performing a song for someone might make them emotional

The phrase 'An according to mean' is incorrect; it should be 'According to me'. 'Can might' is redundant; use 'might'. 'Him emotion' is incorrect; use 'them emotional' for correct pronoun and adjective usage.