唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar by saying "because my voice is not very good" instead of "not that much good." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I don't like singing because my voice isn't very good. Instead, I prefer listening to music as it helps me feel relaxed.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and grammatical errors. Try to keep your sentences simple and clear. Avoid repeating words and ensure your ideas are logically connected with linking words.

範例: No, I have never learned to sing because I'm not interested in it. Instead, I enjoy listening to calm songs as they make me feel peaceful.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas more directly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and improve sentence structure.

範例: I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at it. Instead, I prefer to dedicate songs to my sister.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

範例: Yes, singing can bring happiness to many people. For example, my dad is a very good singer, and for him, singing is an art that connects him to God. In India, singing is very important culturally.

× The reason behind it because my voice is not that much good.

✓ The reason is that my voice is not very good.

The original sentence is a sentence fragment and incorrectly combines 'The reason behind it' and 'because'. The correct structure is 'The reason is that...' to properly introduce the explanation.

× I preferred to listen music because it's making me feel very relaxed.

✓ I prefer to listen to music because it makes me feel very relaxed.

The verb 'prefer' should be in the present tense to match the context, and 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'it's making me' is better expressed as 'it makes me' for habitual actions.

× No, I never learned how to sing 'cause I'm not interested in singing, instead I am interested in listening.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I'm not interested in singing; instead, I am interested in listening.

The present perfect tense 'have never learned' is more appropriate for life experiences. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal speech, and a semicolon or conjunction is needed to connect the two clauses properly.

× Amusing because it actually helps me eat too.

✓ It's amusing because it actually helps me relax too.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Helps me eat' seems incorrect in context; likely, the intended meaning is 'helps me relax'. The sentence needs a subject and verb to be complete.

× I prefer to listen listen a com song becauses make me feel very peaceful.

✓ I prefer to listen to a calm song because it makes me feel very peaceful.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Com' is a typo for 'calm'. 'Becauses' should be 'because', and the verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Rather than a singing a song, I preferred to dedicate a song to my sister because because as it as when I think it will not.

✓ Rather than singing a song, I prefer to dedicate a song to my sister because I think I am not good at singing.

The phrase 'a singing a song' is incorrect; 'singing a song' is correct without 'a'. The sentence is also incomplete and unclear; it needs to be rephrased for clarity and correct tense.

× I already told you I'm not good at singing.

✓ I have already told you I'm not good at singing.

The present perfect tense 'have already told' is more appropriate to indicate an action that has relevance to the present.

× I rather dedicate his song, it will be rather good.

✓ I would rather dedicate this song; it will be better.

'His song' is incorrect here; 'this song' is appropriate. Also, 'I rather dedicate' should be 'I would rather dedicate' to express preference. The sentence is split into two for clarity.

× Yes, for some people singing a song could bring happiness to their life.

✓ Yes, for some people, singing a song could bring happiness to their lives.

The plural 'people' should correspond with the plural 'lives' rather than the singular 'life'.

× Even I saw my dad that my dad is a very good singer.

✓ I have even seen that my dad is a very good singer.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper word order and tense to express the intended meaning.

× He's saying a lot.

✓ He sings a lot.

'He's saying a lot' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'He sings a lot'.

× And for them singing is like a like a art of art which connect them to a got.

✓ And for them, singing is like an art form that connects them to God.

'a like a art of art' is incorrect; it should be 'an art form'. 'connect' should be 'connects' to agree with singular subject 'art form'. 'a got' is a typo for 'God'.

× So in India it is a big deal.

✓ So, in India, it is a big deal.

Adding commas improves readability and clarity in the sentence.