唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Please be careful with word choice and pronunciation. For example, use 'singing' instead of 'thinking'. Also, try to make your sentences clear and avoid repetition. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

範例: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good. Also, I usually avoid singing in front of other people because I feel shy.

建議: Try to answer directly and clearly. Avoid contradictory statements and use correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't like singing. I prefer listening to music rather than singing myself.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Please try to understand the question and answer directly. Use simple sentences and correct vocabulary to express your ideas.

範例: I would like to sing for my family and friends because it makes them happy and creates a warm atmosphere.

建議: Good attempt to answer positively. However, please improve your sentence structure and word choice. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and feel more relaxed.

× No, I don't like thinking becaused I feel that my voice is not very good.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I feel that my voice is not very good.

The student used 'thinking' instead of 'singing', which is incorrect in this context. The question is about singing, so the verb should be 'singing'. Also, 'becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'.

× I usually avoid thinking influence of other people.

✓ I usually avoid the influence of other people.

The phrase 'thinking influence' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'the influence'. Also, 'avoid' is followed by a noun phrase, so 'the influence' is appropriate here.

× No, I had.

✓ No, I haven't.

The student used 'I had' which is past tense and incomplete. The correct response to 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' is 'No, I haven't' (present perfect negative).

× I will learn.

✓ I will learn.

This sentence is correct as it expresses future intention.

× Be 'cause I don't like singing.

✓ Because I don't like singing.

'Be 'cause' is a misspelling of 'because'. The correct conjunction is 'because'.

× So I don't want to learn about it.

✓ So I don't want to learn it.

The phrase 'learn about it' is less natural here; 'learn it' is more appropriate when referring to learning a skill like singing.

× I think I am a good to listen more than singing.

✓ I think I am better at listening than singing.

The original sentence is ungrammatical. The correct comparative structure is 'better at listening than singing'.

× I would like to sing.

✓ I would like to sing for them.

The question asks 'Who do you want to sing for?' so the answer should specify the object 'for them'.

× Frog cross train singing for them feels specials becaused they ask the party and it created a warm encouraging as much missed.

✓ Singing for them feels special because they ask for the party and it creates a warm, encouraging atmosphere that is much missed.

The original sentence contains many errors: 'Frog cross train' is nonsensical, 'feels specials' should be 'feels special', 'becaused' is misspelled 'because', 'ask the party' should be 'ask for the party', and 'created a warm encouraging as much missed' is unclear and corrected to 'creates a warm, encouraging atmosphere that is much missed.'

× Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people be cause is housed them exposed their emotion and few more relaxed.

✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and feel more relaxed.

'be cause' is misspelled 'because', 'is housed them exposed their emotion' is incorrect and should be 'it helps them express their emotions', and 'few more relaxed' should be 'feel more relaxed'.