唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it refreshes my mind and helps me express my emotions. When I sing, I feel relaxed and happy, which improves my mood throughout the day.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and irrelevant information.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons. However, I often listen to music on my mobile phone, which helps me enjoy singing informally.

建議: Your answer is relevant but needs better structure and clearer expression. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition.

範例: I want to sing for my parents because they have supported me during difficult times. Their encouragement has helped me achieve success, so singing for them is my way of showing gratitude.

建議: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Focus on giving a direct response with clear reasons and examples. Use simple, correct sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. In India, singing is often used to express emotions and can help people feel better, especially those who are feeling sad or stressed.

× Yes, I love singing because art is refreshes our mind.

✓ Yes, I love singing because art refreshes our mind.

The word 'is' is incorrectly used before the verb 'refreshes'. The correct form is the simple present tense 'refreshes' to agree with the singular subject 'art'. Remove 'is' to correct the sentence.

× Singing is apart which we can.

✓ Singing is a part of which we can be proud.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Apart' should be 'a part', and the sentence needs completion to convey meaning. Adding 'of which we can be proud' clarifies the intended meaning.

× Already, emotions come out of our body and our neurons start to work. The.

✓ Emotions come out of our body and our neurons start to work.

The word 'Already' is unnecessary and 'The.' at the end is incomplete and incorrect. Removing these makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× No, I have never never learned about singing or never taken a class for singing.

✓ No, I have never learned about singing or taken a class for singing.

The word 'never' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'learned' and 'taken' are correctly used in present perfect tense. Removing the duplicate 'never' corrects the sentence.

× But I haven't listen a lot of music to apps on mobile phones, network, etc.

✓ But I haven't listened to a lot of music on apps on mobile phones, network, etc.

The verb 'listen' should be in past participle form 'listened' after 'haven't'. Also, 'listen to' requires the preposition 'to'. Correcting these makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I really want to sing for my parents because.

✓ I really want to sing for my parents because they have helped me a lot during difficult phases.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a complete clause clarifies the reason and corrects the sentence structure.

× They helped me a lot in our difficult phases.

✓ They helped me a lot during difficult phases.

Using 'our' is incorrect here as the speaker refers to their own difficult phases. 'During' is a better preposition than 'in' for this context.

× By supporting our supporting as giving a good future to attain success in our lives.

✓ By supporting me and helping me to have a good future and attain success in life.

The phrase 'supporting our supporting' is incorrect and unclear. Replacing it with 'supporting me and helping me' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'in our lives' is better as 'in life' for general statement.

× Yes of course in Indian bring happiness to people even if a person will emotional singing singing Karen cured them or a bench or a person who is mentally is instrumentally not stable so person can help.

✓ Yes, of course, singing brings happiness to people in India. Even if a person is emotional, singing can cure them. For a person who is mentally unstable, singing can help.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting sentence structure, verb forms, and word choice clarifies the intended meaning.

× Them. To bring happiness and you're there. Cute their issues annex.

✓ It helps to bring happiness and cure their issues as well.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect pronouns and words. Replacing 'Them' with 'It', correcting 'you're there' to 'and', and 'Cute' to 'cure' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.