唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer should be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to directly answer the question first, then explain briefly. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, say "I liked singing when I was a kid, but now I am busy with my studies, so I don't have much time to sing."

範例: Yes, I liked singing when I was a child, but now I am busy with my daily studies, so I don't have much time to sing.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and better grammar. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words. For example, "Yes, I have learnt singing before. Although I was not very skilled at that time, the lessons helped me improve my skills and knowledge."

範例: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. Although I was not very good at first, the lessons helped me improve my singing skills and knowledge.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your feelings clearly and directly. For example, "I am not interested in singing for others because I feel nervous in front of an audience."

範例: I don't want to sing for anyone because I feel very nervous when I perform in front of people.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to answer directly and use simple, clear sentences. For example, "Yes, singing can bring happiness. When I am sad, singing helps me feel better and relaxed."

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I feel sad, singing helps me relax and feel comforted.

× Yes I like singing when I was a kid, now I am busy on my studies daily routine so I'd not enough time to like a singing.

✓ Yes, I liked singing when I was a kid. Now I am busy with my daily study routine, so I don't have enough time to like singing.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'I'd not enough time' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't have enough time'. 'On my studies daily routine' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'with my daily study routine'. 'To like a singing' is incorrect; 'to like singing' is correct without 'a'.

× Yes, then I wasn't at the standard that time I learn the things related to singing.

✓ Yes, back then I wasn't at the standard; at that time I learned things related to singing.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'learn' instead of past tense 'learned' to match the past time reference. Also, 'then' and 'that time' are redundant; 'back then' or 'at that time' is sufficient.

× It helps to improve my singing skills and my knowledge.

✓ It helped to improve my singing skills and my knowledge.

Since the context is past learning, the verb 'helps' should be in past tense 'helped' to maintain tense consistency.

× So I tried the last time better singing.

✓ So I tried to sing better last time.

The phrase 'the last time better singing' is ungrammatical. It should be 'tried to sing better last time' to correctly express the attempt in past tense.

× No, I am not interesting to sing for anyone, so I think it's not compatible me in the audience.

✓ No, I am not interested in singing for anyone, so I think it's not suitable for me to be in the audience.

'Interesting' is an adjective describing something that causes interest; the correct form is 'interested' to describe the speaker's feeling. 'Compatible me in the audience' is incorrect; 'suitable for me to be in the audience' is correct. Also, 'to sing for anyone' is better than 'to sing for anyone' in this context.

× So I think it's very nervous for me is why I cannot.

✓ So I think it makes me very nervous, which is why I cannot.

'It's very nervous for me' is incorrect; nervous is an adjective describing a person, so 'it makes me very nervous' is correct. 'Is why I cannot' is incomplete; 'which is why I cannot' clarifies the reason.

× Yes it is way off the happiness when I am sad and a nautical comfort table.

✓ Yes, it is a way to happiness when I am sad and need comfort.

'Way off the happiness' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a way to happiness'. 'A nautical comfort table' is nonsensical here; likely intended 'need comfort' or 'a source of comfort'.

× So I think singing with best option to a relief and comfort table field.

✓ So I think singing is the best option for relief and comfort.

'Singing with best option to a relief and comfort table field' is ungrammatical. Correct form is 'singing is the best option for relief and comfort'. 'Comfort table field' is incorrect and unclear.

× I was always saying when I am alone at home not anyone inside me.

✓ I always say it when I am alone at home and no one is around me.

'I was always saying' is past continuous but the context suggests a habitual action, so present simple 'I always say' is better. 'Not anyone inside me' is incorrect; 'no one is around me' or 'no one is inside the house' is correct.

× So I think it's good way to enjoy your happiness with singing.

✓ So I think it's a good way to enjoy happiness through singing.

'Good way to enjoy your happiness with singing' is awkward. 'Enjoy happiness through singing' is more natural. Also, article 'a' is needed before 'good way'.