唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和发音错误，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意发音准确性，避免拼写错误，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress from my studies and daily life. Moreover, it can uplift my spirit and make me feel more energetic.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更准确。

範例: Not really. I have never studied singing systematically. For example, I know some people take courses to improve their singing skills, but I haven't done that.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

範例: To be honest, I am an introverted person, so I am not willing to sing in front of others. Therefore, there is no one I want to sing for.

建議: 回答中存在严重的语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意词汇的正确使用和句子结构的完整。

範例: Yes, definitely. I believe singing is a good way to bring happiness to people because it allows them to come together and share joyful moments.

× Yes I am really king on saying because I think it is a good way for me to release my stress from my study and daily life and also it can. Rise, my spiritual energy.

✓ Yes, I am really keen on singing because I think it is a good way for me to release my stress from my study and daily life and also it can raise my spiritual energy.

动词后面接动名词形式是固定搭配，'keen on'后面应接动名词'singing'，而不是'saying'。另外，'rise'是自动词，表示上升，句中应使用及物动词'rise'的对应词'raise'，表示提升。

× Not really, I mean I never study seeing systematically and for example I know some people will take some courses to practice their skills of thing, but I didn't do that.

✓ Not really, I mean I never studied singing systematically and for example I know some people will take some courses to practice their skills of singing, but I didn't do that.

描述过去的动作时，动词应使用过去式，'study'应改为'studied'。另外，'seeing'应为'singing'，且'skills of thing'应为'skills of singing'。

× Well to be honest, I think I am an introverted person so that I may be not willing to sing in front of others so. There is no one that I want to think for.

✓ Well, to be honest, I think I am an introverted person so I may not be willing to sing in front of others. So, there is no one that I want to sing for.

'so that'用法不当，应改为' so'表示因果关系。'may be not'应改为'may not be'。'think for'应为'sing for'，代词使用错误。

× Yes, definitely, I really agree that they say is a good way to bring well leanness to people because I think through thing people can get can thing together to enjoy the cherished moment sharing.

✓ Yes, definitely, I really agree that they say singing is a good way to bring wellness to people because I think through singing people can get together to enjoy the cherished moments sharing.

'they say is'缺少主语，应加'singing'。'well leanness'拼写错误，应为'wellness'。'thing'应为'singing'。句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。