唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific reasons and examples.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me manage my emotions. For instance, when I feel stressed, singing relaxes me. Similarly, I enjoy singing when I'm happy as it enhances my mood. My favorite song is "Cigarettes After Sex" because of its soothing melody.

建議: Respond directly and clearly to the question with a topic sentence, then add supporting details if necessary. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "OK, that's all." Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: No, I have never learnt how to sing because I don't aspire to be a professional singer. Currently, I am focusing on my diploma studies in microbiology, which takes up most of my time.

建議: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a direct response, then explain your reason with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and try to be specific.

範例: I don't have anyone in particular to sing for because I have never learned how to sing. Moreover, since my voice is not very good, I prefer to keep quiet rather than sing for others.

建議: Improve clarity by using correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically and provide specific reasons.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it can influence their mood. For example, if someone sings or listens to cheerful music, it can help regulate their emotions and make them feel happier.

× Yes. Uhm it's depends actually.

✓ Yes. Uhm it depends actually.

The modal verb 'it's' (it is) is incorrectly used with 'depends'. The correct form is 'it depends' without 'is'. In English, 'depends' is a verb that does not require 'is' before it in this context.

× Also when also when I'm happy I also sings.

✓ Also, when I'm happy I also sing.

The verb 'sings' is incorrectly used with the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct verb form is 'sing' without 's' for 'I'.

× My favorite song is cigarette after sex.

✓ My favorite song is 'Cigarette After Sex'.

The song title should be capitalized and enclosed in quotes to indicate it is a proper noun. This is a stylistic correction rather than a grammatical one.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past tense form, while 'learned' is American English. Both are correct, but consistency is important. Since the rest of the transcript uses American English, 'learned' is preferred.

× Of course not, because I don't have to dream to be a singer.

✓ Of course not, because I don't have a dream to be a singer.

The phrase 'don't have to dream' incorrectly uses the modal verb 'have to'. The correct expression is 'don't have a dream' to indicate lack of desire or aspiration.

× Since I have never learns how to sing and I think I have anyone's on my mind to sing for.

✓ Since I have never learned how to sing and I don't have anyone in my mind to sing for.

'Learns' is incorrect with 'I' in present perfect tense; it should be 'learned'. Also, 'have anyone's on my mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'don't have anyone in my mind'.

× As my voice is not really good to be a singer so we'll just keep my most quiet.

✓ As my voice is not really good to be a singer, so I'll just keep quiet.

'We'll' (we will) is incorrect when referring to oneself; it should be 'I'll' (I will). 'My most quiet' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep quiet'.

× Yes, singing do bring happiness to the people but it's depends on the generator itself if you 'cause if you play like some set music, it will also regulate your your mind if you play some music that have this candy or happy.

✓ Yes, singing does bring happiness to people, but it depends on the generator itself because if you play some set music, it will also regulate your mind if you play some music that is candy or happy.

The verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. 'It's depends' should be 'it depends'. 'Have' should be 'is' to agree with singular 'music'. The sentence is also corrected for clarity and grammar.