唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, after a stressful day, singing a song makes me feel comfortable and happy.

建議: Câu trả lời cần đầy đủ và rõ ràng hơn, tránh các câu ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing when I was a child. My uncle took me to singing classes to help me improve my voice.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh các câu không hoàn chỉnh và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I want to sing for everyone, especially famous singers like Anne and Karen. I hope to perform with them someday.

建議: Câu trả lời cần tránh các câu không rõ nghĩa và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and comfortable after a busy day at work.

× I'd really like singing because I want to be a singer an I feel comfortable when I sing a song.

✓ I'd really like to sing because I want to be a singer and I feel comfortable when I sing a song.

The verb 'like' is usually followed by the infinitive form 'to sing' when expressing preference or desire. Using 'singing' here is less appropriate. Also, 'an' should be 'and' for correct conjunction usage.

× And I. Can relax after. Are stressful.

✓ And I can relax after being stressed.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be combined into a complete sentence with proper verb forms to express the idea of relaxing after stress.

× I have learned. When I was a child. My uncle learn, take me. Sing.

✓ I learned when I was a child. My uncle taught me to sing.

The past tense 'learned' is correct, but the sentence fragments need to be combined. 'Learn' should be 'taught' to indicate the uncle's action, and 'take me sing' is incorrect; it should be 'taught me to sing'.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× I want to sing for everyone. Who is? Singer. Girl singer. Anne. I, Karen. Sing. With them together.

✓ I want to sing for everyone who is a singer, like Anne and Karen. I want to sing with them together.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. They should be combined into coherent sentences with proper relative clauses and conjunctions.

× Yard security add things. Singing can bring happiness to people because it's her. Me and everyone feel comfortable and relax after work on. They are busy daily life an.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people because it helps me and everyone feel comfortable and relaxed after work. People are busy with daily life.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unclear phrases. They need to be restructured into clear, complete sentences with correct verb forms and vocabulary.