唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, instead of saying "I prefer to singing and crying simultaneously because it's a relief, my stress and my upset," you could say "I find singing alone helps me relieve stress and improve my mood." Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and focus on clear, natural expressions.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I'm alone because it helps me relax and lift my spirits. Singing allows me to express my emotions and reduces my stress effectively.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, avoiding unnecessary repetition. For example, instead of repeating "I don't have a good voice" multiple times, you could say "I have never taken singing lessons because I believe singing requires natural talent and dedication."

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I believe singing requires natural talent and a lot of practice, which I haven't pursued.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas logically and use correct grammar. For example, instead of "I feel shy when I seeing for lots of people and my family and my friends," say "I feel shy singing in front of others, even my family and friends." Also, avoid unclear phrases like "because a arm."

範例: I usually prefer to sing alone because I feel shy singing in front of others, including my family and friends. However, when I'm on holiday with my husband, I sometimes sing along to songs playing in the background.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and correct grammar. For example, instead of "the aim of singing bring happiness for people," say "singing can bring happiness to people." Also, "it increased a special hormone called adrenaline" is inaccurate; you might mean endorphins or dopamine. Try to use accurate vocabulary and complete your thoughts.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it improves our mood. Research shows that singing releases endorphins, which help us feel happier and more relaxed.

× I prefer to singing and crying simultaneously because it's a relief, my stress and my upset.

✓ I prefer singing and crying simultaneously because it's a relief for my stress and my upset.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'relief' should be followed by 'for' to indicate what is relieved.

× it's a relief, my stress and my upset.

✓ it's a relief for my stress and my upset.

The noun 'relief' requires the preposition 'for' to specify what is being relieved.

× I feel shy when I seeing for lots of people and my family and my friends.

✓ I feel shy when I sing for lots of people and my family and my friends.

The verb after 'when I' should be in base form or appropriate tense; 'seeing' is incorrect here. 'Sing' fits the context.

× I feel shy when I seeing for lots of people and my family and my friends.

✓ I feel shy when I sing for lots of people and my family and my friends.

The preposition 'for' is correct here to indicate the audience of singing.

× So I never try it because I don't have.

✓ So I never tried it because I don't have one.

The verb 'try' should be in past tense 'tried' to match 'never'. Also, 'I don't have' is incomplete; adding 'one' clarifies the meaning.

× It can improves our mood.

✓ It can improve our mood.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'improve' should be used, not 'improves'.

× Studies show that when people singing it increased a special hormone which is called adrenaline.

✓ Studies show that when people sing, it increases a special hormone called adrenaline.

After 'when', the verb should be in base form 'sing' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'increased' should be 'increases' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× And the other thing that I'd like to mention it.

✓ And the other thing that I'd like to mention is...

The sentence is incomplete and 'mention' should be followed by a noun or clause. Also, 'it' is unnecessary here.