唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions, such as 'I like singing because it helps me relax and forget daily worries. It also allows me to express my emotions and be myself.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: I like singing because it helps me relax and forget about daily worries. It also allows me to express my emotions and be myself. Singing makes me feel happy and calm.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb tenses and clearer wording. For example, say 'Yes, I am currently taking singing classes, but I mostly practice by myself.' Also, try to provide a bit more detail to enrich your answer.

範例: Yes, I am currently taking singing classes to improve my skills. However, I mostly practice singing by myself at home to reinforce what I learn in class.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammar and fluency issues. Try to form complete sentences and avoid filler words like 'UH'. For example, say 'I would like to sing for my parents and family because they all enjoy singing. I want to join them and sing together.' This makes your answer clearer and more natural.

範例: I would like to sing for my parents and other family members because they all enjoy singing. I want to join them and sing together as a family.

建議: Your answer has grammar errors and is somewhat unclear. Use correct verb forms and connect your ideas smoothly. For example, say 'Yes, singing definitely brings happiness to people who enjoy it. It also helps me feel happier and more confident.' This improves clarity and coherence.

範例: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness to people who enjoy it. It also helps me feel happier and more confident in myself.

× I do like singing because it's such a great way to relax an don't mine on daily worries.

✓ I do like singing because it's such a great way to relax and not mind daily worries.

The phrase 'an don't mine' is incorrect. It should be 'and not mind' to correctly connect the ideas and use the correct verb form. 'Mine' is a noun or possessive pronoun, but here the verb 'mind' is needed, and 'don't' should be replaced with 'not' to fit the infinitive form after 'and'.

× And just. Be yourself by singing an expressing your emotions.

✓ And just be yourself by singing and expressing your emotions.

The sentence is fragmented with an unnecessary period after 'just' and 'an' instead of 'and'. The correction removes the period to make a complete sentence and replaces 'an' with 'and' to properly connect the verbs.

× Yes, I'm learning how to sing right now because currently I'm attending singing class but mostly I seen just by myself.

✓ Yes, I'm learning how to sing right now because currently I'm attending singing class but mostly I have seen it just by myself.

The verb 'seen' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'singing class' should be 'a singing class' (article error), but since only grammar problem types from the list are to be corrected, this is left as is.

× I would like to sing for my parents and for my family members, because my whole family. UH is singing and I would love to join to them and singing together.

✓ I would like to sing for my parents and for my family members, because my whole family is singing and I would love to join them and sing together.

The preposition 'to' after 'join' is incorrect; 'join' is followed directly by the object without a preposition. Also, 'singing together' should be 'sing together' to maintain parallel verb form.

× Yes, it's definitely brings a lot of happiness if people enjoy singing and it makes me more happy.

✓ Yes, it definitely brings a lot of happiness if people enjoy singing and it makes me happier.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'bring' in third person singular form 'brings' without 'is'. Also, 'more happy' is less natural than the comparative adjective 'happier'.

× And. Confidence in themselves.

✓ And confidence in themselves.

The sentence fragment 'And. Confidence in themselves.' is incomplete. Removing the period creates a phrase that can be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased for clarity.