唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and irrelevant information (e.g., '4 cats'). Try to give a clear, concise reason why you like singing, avoiding unrelated details. Use complete sentences and correct grammar.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget about my daily worries. It is a great way to unwind after a busy day.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid unclear phrases like 'I have not heard of him.' Clearly state whether you have taken singing lessons or are self-taught, using proper grammar and sentence structure.

範例: Yes, I have taken some singing classes, but mostly I teach myself by practicing alone at home.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Clearly state who you want to sing for and why. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'see for' or 'all thing singing.'

範例: I want to sing for my family members because they also enjoy singing, and it would be fun to share this activity together.

建議: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'Ann just singing at the moment.' Use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary to express your opinion clearly.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people relax and clear their minds. Singing allows me to enjoy the present moment and feel joyful.

× Yes, I love singing so much because it helps me too. 4 cats, all the things I should do an just chill out without thinking about anything.

✓ Yes, I love singing so much because it helps me too. I have 4 cats, and I can just chill out without thinking about anything.

The original sentence lacks the preposition 'have' to indicate possession of cats and misses the conjunction 'and' to connect ideas properly. Adding 'I have' clarifies ownership, and 'and' connects the two clauses correctly.

× Yes, I have not heard of him because I was attending singing class, but mostly I'm teaching myself and I just singing by myself.

✓ Yes, I have not taken formal lessons because I was attending singing class, but mostly I'm teaching myself and I just sing by myself.

The phrase 'have not heard of him' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'have not taken formal lessons' or similar. Also, 'I just singing' is incorrect; the verb should be in base form 'sing' after 'just'. The past continuous 'was attending' is acceptable here.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I want to see for my family members because they're all thing singing too and I could see with them together.

✓ I want to sing for my family members because they all like singing too and I could sing with them together.

The phrase 'I want to see for my family members' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to sing for my family members'. 'They're all thing singing too' is incorrect; it should be 'they all like singing too'. 'I could see with them together' should be 'I could sing with them together' to match the context.

× Singing definitely brings up happiness to people because it's such a great method to chill out your brain and just relax and don't think about anything. Ann just singing at the moment.

✓ Singing definitely brings happiness to people because it's such a great method to chill out your brain and just relax and not think about anything. And just singing at the moment.

The phrase 'brings up happiness to people' is incorrect; it should be 'brings happiness to people'. 'Don't think' should be 'not think' to maintain parallel structure after 'just relax'. 'Ann' is a typo and should be 'And'.