唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage like 'single song' and 'fresh my mood'.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and refresh my mood when I feel tired. Singing a favorite song always lifts my spirits.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many errors in vocabulary and grammar. Use correct words and sentence structures. Start with a clear topic sentence and then provide specific details about your singing lessons. Avoid confusing or incorrect terms like 'Scandisk school' and 'ascending'.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school. We had music classes where the teacher taught us singing techniques and music theory.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incorrect phrases like 'single for a specific person' and 'unclean interesting'.

範例: I usually don't sing for a particular person, but once on Father's Day, I sang a song for my father. He was very happy, and that made me feel relieved and more interested in singing.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors in grammar and word choice. Use simple and correct sentences to express your opinion. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people. It helps them relax and feel peaceful. Many people enjoy singing or listening to music because it improves their mood.

× I like singing whenever I feel very tired and whenever I want to fresh my mood.

✓ I like singing whenever I feel very tired and whenever I want to freshen my mood.

The verb 'fresh' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'freshen' when used as a verb meaning to make something fresh or improve it. Using 'fresh' alone is an adjective, so 'freshen' should be used with the verb form ending in '-en' to indicate the action.

× So I am mostly often single song or anything else.

✓ So I mostly often sing a single song or anything else.

The phrase 'single song' is singular, but the sentence structure is incorrect. The verb 'single' is wrongly used instead of 'sing'. Also, 'mostly often' is redundant; 'mostly' or 'often' alone would suffice. The correction uses 'sing a single song' to properly express the action.

× I remember that when I was in my Scandisk school, I learned a lot of things about your music and singing, and we have a lesson and the class about ascending.

✓ I remember that when I was in my Scandisk school, I learned a lot of things about your music and singing, and we had a lesson and a class about singing.

The verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to match the past context. Also, 'ascending' is incorrect; the intended word is 'singing'. The correction aligns the tense and corrects the vocabulary.

× So yes, I learn about singing in my Schandra school.

✓ So yes, I learned about singing in my Schandra school.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to maintain tense consistency.

× Honestly speaking, I never single for a specific person but I remember when on my Father's Day I sing a song for my father and he felt if I over the moon at that time and it gives me very relieved and as well as unclean interesting in singing.

✓ Honestly speaking, I never sing for a specific person but I remember on my Father's Day I sang a song for my father and he felt I was over the moon at that time and it gave me great relief as well as increased my interest in singing.

The verb 'single' is incorrect; it should be 'sing'. The verb 'sing' in present tense should be 'sang' in past tense to match the past event. The phrase 'he felt if I over the moon' is incorrect; it should be 'he felt I was over the moon'. 'It gives me very relieved' is incorrect; it should be 'it gave me great relief'. 'Unclean interesting' is incorrect; it should be 'increased my interest'. The corrections fix verb forms, tense, and vocabulary errors.

× So I'm mainly sing a song for him.

✓ So I mainly sing a song for him.

The phrase 'I'm mainly sing' is incorrect; it should be 'I mainly sing'. The auxiliary 'am' is unnecessary here and causes a tense error.

× Definitely singing can bring happiness to individuals that I mentioned earlier.

✓ Definitely, singing can bring happiness to individuals, as I mentioned earlier.

A comma is needed after 'definitely' and before 'as' to improve sentence clarity. The phrase 'that I mentioned earlier' is better expressed as 'as I mentioned earlier' for correctness.

× Individuals can feel old, relax and relieve whenever there saying.

✓ Individuals can feel calm, relaxed, and relieved whenever they are singing.

The word 'old' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'calm' or similar. 'Relax' and 'relieve' should be in adjective form 'relaxed' and 'relieved'. 'There' is incorrect; it should be 'they are'. 'Saying' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. The correction fixes word choice, verb forms, and pronouns.

× Even in this modern era most of individual prefer or singing music and because of their come as well As for peace.

✓ Even in this modern era, most individuals prefer singing music because it brings them peace.

'Most of individual' is incorrect; it should be 'most individuals'. 'Prefer or singing music' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer singing music'. 'Because of their come as well As for peace' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'because it brings them peace'. The correction addresses pluralization, verb usage, and sentence clarity.