唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more coherent and natural by avoiding short, incomplete sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I absolutely love singing because it is a wonderful form of expression that brings me joy. I often sing every day, especially when I'm cleaning my room or driving around. Singing helps me relax and improves my mood.

建議: Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases and focus on giving a clear, direct answer. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically and keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I see it as a hobby rather than a career. Therefore, I never felt the need to take formal lessons.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'lovey dovey'. Use linking words to make your answer more fluent and provide specific details in a natural way.

範例: I would like to sing for my future husband because I think it would be a fun and romantic activity. For example, we could sing love songs to each other, which would make our relationship more special and enjoyable.

建議: Improve clarity by avoiding fragmented sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

範例: Definitely, singing brings happiness to people because it can uplift their mood. For instance, when I hear a good song, I feel happier. Also, many people go to clubs to listen to music and dance, which shows how singing and music create joy.

× And it is. A hobby I would see for myself.

✓ And it is a hobby I would see for myself.

The original sentence is fragmented into two incomplete sentences. Combining them into one complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think every single day, all the time when I'm cleaning my room.

✓ I think about it every single day, all the time when I'm cleaning my room.

The original sentence lacks a clear verb and object, making it incomplete. Adding 'about it' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× Or just driving around.

✓ Or just when I'm driving around.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'when I'm' completes the sentence and connects it properly to the previous sentence.

× Aye. Two think. Cash ready.

✓ I think so. Just casually.

The original sentence contains unclear and fragmented phrases that do not convey a clear meaning. Replacing with a clear, complete sentence improves understanding.

× We could sing love songs to each other and we all lovey dovey to each other so I feel like it would be really cute.

✓ We could sing love songs to each other and be all lovey-dovey, so I feel like it would be really cute.

The phrase 'we all lovey dovey to each other' is incorrect. Using 'be all lovey-dovey' correctly uses the adjective form and verb to express the intended meaning.

× As we can see all arounders peoples.

✓ As we can see all around us, people.

The phrase 'all arounders peoples' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'around us' and the plural noun is 'people' without 's' at the end.

× Mood.

✓ Their mood improves.

The single word 'Mood.' is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. Expanding it to a full sentence clarifies the meaning.

× I usually uplifted once a song is being played.

✓ I usually feel uplifted once a song is played.

The verb 'uplifted' is incorrectly used as the main verb. Using 'feel uplifted' correctly expresses the state. Also, 'is being played' can be simplified to 'is played' for clarity.