唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use simple and correct phrases like 'I don't like singing because I find it difficult to remember the lyrics and I lack confidence in my voice.' This will make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: I don't like singing because I find it hard to remember the lyrics, and I am not confident about my voice. Therefore, I feel I cannot sing in a clear tone.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas, for example, 'I once tried to learn a song, but I found it difficult to remember the lyrics, which affected my confidence.' This will make your answer more coherent and easier to understand.

範例: I once tried to learn a song, but I found it difficult to remember the lyrics, so my confidence was low.

建議: Make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I would like to sing for my husband because he is my soulmate and I love him.' This will make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: I would like to sing for my husband because he is my soulmate and I love him.

建議: Clarify your ideas and use correct expressions. For example, 'Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel relaxed and boosts their confidence when speaking in front of an audience.' This will improve the content and coherence of your answer.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel relaxed and increases their confidence when speaking in public.

× I don't have confident confidence about my voice.

✓ I don't have confidence about my voice.

The word 'confident' is an adjective, but here a noun 'confidence' is needed to correctly express the idea. Using 'confident confidence' is redundant and incorrect.

× I cannot sink in a clear tone.

✓ I cannot sing in a clear tone.

The verb 'sink' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'sing'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects sentence meaning.

× I think I found difficult in remember in the lyrics.

✓ I think I found it difficult to remember the lyrics.

The phrase 'found difficult in remember in' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'found it difficult to remember'. Also, 'in' before 'remember' is unnecessary.

× So the one reason that can be like of my confidence.

✓ So one reason could be my lack of confidence.

The phrase 'like of my confidence' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'my lack of confidence' to indicate the reason.

× even I get a chance to sing so I will sing for him.

✓ Even if I get a chance to sing, I will sing for him.

The sentence lacks the conjunction 'if' to form a conditional clause. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause for clarity.

× Singing can bring happiness to the people's paper filled relax while singing and it gives them more confidence to speak in audience.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people; it helps them feel relaxed while singing and gives them more confidence to speak in front of an audience.

The phrase 'the people's paper filled relax' is incorrect and unclear. 'People' should not have 'the' here. 'Feel relaxed' is the correct phrase. Also, 'speak in audience' should be 'speak in front of an audience' or 'speak to an audience'. The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'people' and 'audience'.