唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt cảm xúc khi hát.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel happy after a long day.

建議: Câu trả lời không liên quan và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh nói lan man hoặc dùng từ không phù hợp.

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but I would like to take singing lessons in the future.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, đồng thời giải thích thêm nếu cần để làm rõ ý định của mình.

範例: I want to sing for my friends, especially when we have parties or gatherings together.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do tại sao hát có thể mang lại hạnh phúc cho mọi người.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and feel more relaxed.

× Actually I very like singing because it made me the tillou when I when I seen I feel very relaxed.

✓ Actually, I really like singing because it makes me feel relaxed when I see it.

The sentence contains incorrect verb forms: 'made' should be 'makes' to match present tense, and 'seen' should be 'see' in present tense. Also, 'very like' is incorrect; 'really like' is appropriate. The phrase 'the tillou' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo, so it was omitted for clarity.

× Actually I very like singing because it made me the tillou when I when I seen I feel very relaxed.

✓ Actually, I really like singing because it makes me feel relaxed when I see it.

The verb 'made' is incorrectly used in past tense; it should be 'makes' to agree with the present tense context. Similarly, 'seen' is past participle but should be 'see' in present tense here.

× Actually I very like singing because it made me the tillou when I when I seen I feel very relaxed.

✓ Actually, I really like singing because it makes me feel relaxed when I see it.

'Very like' is incorrect; 'really like' is the correct adverbial phrase to express strong liking.

× Not yet but I draw everyday area. I have Patty every time I have active. I will try. I seen some some very sad.

✓ Not yet, but I draw every day. I practice every time I am active. I will try. I have seen some very sad ones.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'draw everyday area' is unclear, likely meant 'draw every day'; 'have Patty' should be 'practice'; 'I have active' should be 'I am active'; 'seen' should be 'have seen' for present perfect tense.

× I want to sing with for my friend.

✓ I want to sing for my friend.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used together with 'for'. The correct preposition here is 'for' to indicate the beneficiary of the singing.

× Church may an friend so I. Just saying from my friend.

✓ I go to church with my friends. I just sing for my friends.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and structure. Correct pronouns and clearer sentence structure are needed.

× Yes, it's made people can. An Android phone so. It guys singing a lot. They can feel better better.

✓ Yes, of course. Singing makes people happy. Many people sing a lot. They can feel better.

'It's made' is incorrect; 'makes' is correct in present tense. The rest of the sentence is unclear and contains errors; it was corrected for clarity and grammar.