唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, my wife recently bought me a microphone, which has encouraged me to practice more often. Singing has become a part of my daily routine, and it reminds me of my childhood when I used to sing for fun.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain how you have been learning recently, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid unnecessary repetition and unclear phrases.

範例: No, I have never had formal singing lessons. However, since last month, I have been using YouTube tutorials and karaoke apps to practice. This has helped me improve my singing skills, although I still want to get better.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Start with a direct response, then explain your feelings or reasons with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid unclear or incomplete sentences.

範例: I prefer to sing for myself rather than for others because singing energises me and makes me feel rejuvenated. This personal enjoyment is the main reason I started singing regularly.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains errors. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific examples or reasons, using linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music often reflects different emotions. For instance, some songs can energise us, while others can comfort us when we feel sad. It depends on the type of song and how it resonates with the listener.

× Yes I do love singing nowadays I thinking by using Mike and my wife own brought me a Buffalo.

✓ Yes, I do love singing nowadays. I am thinking of using a mic, and my wife bought me a Buffalo.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I thinking' instead of the present continuous form 'I am thinking'. Also, 'Mike' should be 'mic' (microphone), and 'my wife own brought me a Buffalo' is incorrect; it should be 'my wife bought me a Buffalo'. The present continuous tense requires the auxiliary verb 'am' with the '-ing' form of the verb.

× Also since last few months I've been singing and practicing so I can remember when I was a child I I don't know how.

✓ Also, since the last few months, I've been singing and practicing, so I can remember when I was a child, but I don't know how.

The sentence lacks proper punctuation and conjunctions to connect ideas clearly. 'Since last few months' should be 'since the last few months'. The phrase 'I I don't know how' is repetitive and unclear; adding 'but' clarifies the contrast. The past tense 'was' is correct here.

× No I never learn how to sing but since last month I use YouTube feed.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but since last month I have been using YouTube videos.

The verb 'learn' in past tense should be 'learned' or 'learnt'. Also, 'use' should be in present perfect continuous 'have been using' to indicate an action started in the past and continuing now. 'YouTube feed' is better expressed as 'YouTube videos'.

× Yours. Any specific specifically care? OK I use karaoke to improve my singing abilities so I think now now I can sing some musics but I want to improve.

✓ Do you mean any specific care? OK, I use karaoke to improve my singing abilities, so I think now I can sing some songs, but I want to improve.

The sentence 'Yours. Any specific specifically care?' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misstatement. 'Musics' is incorrect; the plural of 'music' is uncountable, so 'some songs' is appropriate. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Actually, I don't want to sing for anybody else, but I like to sing for me, because when I sing so on, it's it's cumae energetic is me is make me feel rejuvenates.

✓ Actually, I don't want to sing for anybody else, but I like to sing for myself, because when I sing, it makes me feel energetic and rejuvenated.

The pronoun 'me' should be the reflexive pronoun 'myself' when the subject and object are the same. The phrase 'it's cumae energetic is me is make me feel rejuvenates' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'it makes me feel energetic and rejuvenated' for clarity and correctness.

× So that's why I'm I started to sing in and also are quite intervene by those some some.

✓ So that's why I started to sing, and I am also quite influenced by those around me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I'm I started to sing in' is incorrect; it should be 'I started to sing'. 'Are quite intervene by those some some' is nonsensical; likely intended to express being influenced by others. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when we listen to pee in songs, it's sometimes is energy somewhere makes us feel sad somewhere very and happy.

✓ Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when we listen to songs, sometimes they have energy that makes us feel sad or happy.

The phrase 'listen to pee in songs' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to songs'. The sentence structure is awkward and contains unnecessary words like 'somewhere' and 'very'. The corrected sentence uses proper prepositions and clearer structure.

× So all related to the kind of kind of singing or songs.

✓ So it all depends on the kind of singing or songs.

The phrase 'all related to the kind of kind of singing or songs' is repetitive and awkward. The correction uses a clearer expression to convey the intended meaning, improving adjective usage and sentence clarity.