唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some repetition. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I like singing because it is a fantastic way to express emotions and relieve stress. Moreover, singing with my friends and family helps me improve my skills."

範例: Yes, I like singing because it is a fantastic way to express emotions and relieve stress. Moreover, singing with my friends and family helps me improve my skills and enjoy the activity more.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Avoid using incorrect expressions like "used to take part on" and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "Yes, I learned singing at school. Additionally, my college offers many music sessions, and I participated in them to learn singing techniques and breathing exercises."

範例: Yes, I learned singing at school. Additionally, my college offers many music sessions, and I participated in them to learn singing techniques and breathing exercises, which helped me improve my voice control.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and lacks coherence. Try to combine your ideas into complete sentences and use linking words to connect them. For example, "I usually sing for my family and friends because they boost my confidence and appreciate my singing. They are my real supporters, so I enjoy singing at family gatherings."

範例: I usually sing for my family and friends because they boost my confidence and appreciate my singing. They are my real supporters, so I enjoy singing at family gatherings where everyone enjoys my performance.

建議: Your answer has some unclear words and incomplete sentences. Use correct vocabulary and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. For example, "Yes, definitely. Singing is a fantastic way to express feelings and emotions. Moreover, it releases endorphins, which make people feel happy. I enjoy singing for my family and friends at events."

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing is a fantastic way to express feelings and emotions. Moreover, it releases endorphins, which make people feel happy. I enjoy singing for my family and friends at events, which brings joy to everyone.

× Yes, I like singing because it's a fantastic way to express feeling and emotions to others and also is amazing way to relieve stress.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it's a fantastic way to express feelings and emotions to others and also an amazing way to relieve stress.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match 'emotions' and to correctly express multiple feelings. Also, 'is amazing way' lacks an article; it should be 'an amazing way' because 'way' is a singular countable noun requiring an article.

× I love to sing with my friends and family because they've raised my singing qualities and and and suggest to enhance my singing sessions are used to.

✓ I love to sing with my friends and family because they've improved my singing skills and suggested ways to enhance my singing sessions that I am used to.

The sentence has repeated 'and' and unclear phrasing. 'Raised my singing qualities' is incorrect; 'improved my singing skills' is appropriate. 'Suggest to enhance' is incorrect; it should be 'suggested ways to enhance'. The phrase 'sessions are used to' is unclear and corrected to 'sessions that I am used to' for clarity.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing in my school.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my school.

In this context, simple past tense 'learned' is more appropriate than present perfect 'have learned' because the action happened at a specific time in the past (school period).

× There are so many music sessions available in my college so I have used to take part on all of them becauses there are so many teachers who taught me about singing techniques and breathing exercise about singing.

✓ There are so many music sessions available in my college, so I used to take part in all of them because there are many teachers who taught me about singing techniques and breathing exercises for singing.

The phrase 'have used to' is incorrect; it should be 'used to' for past habitual action. The preposition 'take part on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'take part in'. 'Becauses' is a typo and corrected to 'because'. 'Breathing exercise about singing' is better as 'breathing exercises for singing'.

× And there are low.

✓ And there are few.

The sentence 'And there are low.' is incomplete and unclear. Likely intended to say 'And there are few' to indicate scarcity. The original sentence lacks a noun after 'few' to be complete, but given context, 'few' is the correct word instead of 'low'.

× And praise me for my singing qualities.

✓ They praise me for my singing qualities.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'They' clarifies who praises the speaker.

× Family and friends are my real. Supporters of my life, so I love to sing for them and.

✓ Family and friends are my real supporters in life, so I love to sing for them.

The sentence is fragmented and has an unnecessary period after 'real'. Combining the fragments and correcting 'of my life' to 'in life' improves clarity and grammar.

× In the family gathering, I usually sing and they love my singing. That's why I.

✓ In family gatherings, I usually sing, and they love my singing. That's why I enjoy it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'That's why I.' Completing the sentence with 'enjoy it' makes it complete and meaningful. Also, 'family gathering' is better as plural 'family gatherings' for general statement.

× Yes definitely because it's a fantastic way to express feeling and emotions.

✓ Yes, definitely, because it's a fantastic way to express feelings and emotions.

'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match 'emotions' and to correctly express multiple feelings.

× Singing can bring happiness in many ways becaused it releases and drop Inns which which gives happiness to people.

✓ Singing can bring happiness in many ways because it releases endorphins which give happiness to people.

'Becaused' is a typo corrected to 'because'. 'Drop Inns' is incorrect; the correct word is 'endorphins'. The phrase 'which which' is repeated and corrected to single 'which'. Also, 'gives' is corrected to 'give' to agree with plural 'endorphins'.

× I love to sing for my family and friends and the. In the event.

✓ I love to sing for my family and friends at events.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining and simplifying to 'at events' makes it grammatically correct and clear.