唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议练习简单句型表达原因，并注意语法正确。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and enjoy my favorite songs.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议使用完整句子直接回答问题，并简要说明原因。

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not a professional singer and singing is not my main job.

建議: 回答表达了情感，但语法和句子结构不完整，建议使用连贯句子表达情感和原因。

範例: I want to sing for my lover because singing can express my feelings and show him how much I love him.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词连接句子。

範例: I think singing can bring happiness depending on the song. Some songs make you feel happy, while others can make you feel sad because of their lyrics.

× I like singing because saying can relax myself an.

✓ I like singing because singing can relax me.

这里'saying'应为'singing'，因为主语是喜欢唱歌，动词应使用动名词形式。'myself an'是不正确的反身代词用法，应改为'me'。

× Can. Sing the song I like.

✓ I can sing the songs I like.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，应补充完整。'song'应为复数'songs'，因为通常喜欢多首歌。

× No, I didn't learn how to sing before 'cause I did did not.

✓ No, I didn't learn how to sing before because I did not.

重复使用'did'是错误的，应去掉多余的'did'。'cause'应写为完整单词'because'以正式表达。

× Professional singer and singing.

✓ Being a professional singer and singing

句子不完整，缺少谓语和主语，应补充完整表达。

× Isn't my major job so I don't need to spend a lot of time to learn how to sing.

✓ isn't my major job, so I don't need to spend a lot of time learning how to sing.

句子缺少主语，且动词形式不正确。'to learn'应改为动名词'learning'。

× I want to sing for my lover because singing a song can express my emotional, can let him know how.

✓ I want to sing for my lover because singing a song can express my emotions and let him know how

'emotional'是形容词，应改为名词'emotions'。连接词'and'应连接两个并列谓语。

× I love him, yeah.

✓ I love him, yeah.

句子结构正确，无需修改。

× Well I think it's it's depends on what song you have seen.

✓ Well, I think it depends on what song you have heard.

'it's it's depends'重复且错误，应为'it depends'。'have seen'不适用于歌曲，应改为'heard'。

× Samsung can make you feel happier.

✓ Some songs can make you feel happier.

'Samsung'是品牌名，错误使用，应为'some songs'。

× Samsung can make you feel sad.

✓ Some songs can make you feel sad.

同上，'Samsung'应改为'some songs'。

× Of because many songs the lyrics is difference, yeah.

✓ Because many songs have different lyrics, yeah.

'Of because'错误，应为'because'。'the lyrics is difference'主谓不一致，应为'lyrics are different'或'have different lyrics'。