唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response and explain clearly why you like singing, using simple and correct English. Avoid unnecessary or incorrect words like 'icing'.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings and emotions clearly.

建議: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Give a clear and concise response, mentioning where and how you learned singing. Use proper sentence structure and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I have learnt singing at my school where I attended several singing classes.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on giving a clear answer about who you like to sing for, and explain briefly why. Avoid confusing phrases and incorrect words.

範例: I usually like to sing for my family and friends, but sometimes I sing for myself because I understand my own feelings best.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use simple and correct English to explain how singing brings happiness.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and connect with others.

× Yes, I like a singing because of icing, we can express our feelings.

✓ Yes, I like singing because through it, we can express our feelings.

The article 'a' before 'singing' is incorrect because 'singing' is an uncountable noun here. Also, 'icing' seems to be a typo for 'singing'. The sentence should not have 'a' before 'singing' and should clarify the meaning for better understanding.

× Yes Sir, and I learned the singing in my school and there are a number of classes which is taught to me or singing.

✓ Yes Sir, I learned singing in my school, and there were a number of classes which were taught to me for singing.

The verb 'learned' is correct in past tense, but 'are' should be 'were' to match past tense context. Also, 'which is taught' should be 'which were taught' to agree with plural 'classes'. The phrase 'or singing' is unclear and corrected to 'for singing' to make sense.

× I generally prefer to sing for my family as well As for Miley gives A and my friends, but moreover I wanted to a single for myself because I know myself more than anyone.

✓ I generally prefer to sing for my family as well as for my friends, but moreover, I want to sing for myself because I know myself better than anyone.

The phrase 'Miley gives A' is unclear and seems to be a mishearing or typo; it is removed for clarity. 'Wanted to a single' is incorrect; it should be 'want to sing'. Also, 'myself more than anyone' is better expressed as 'myself better than anyone'. The pronouns and verb forms are corrected accordingly.

× Yes, I believe that is singing and bring happiness to people because by singing we can express our feelings as well as we can also pray someone's personality by sinking.

✓ Yes, I believe that singing brings happiness to people because by singing we can express our feelings as well as appreciate someone's personality through singing.

The phrase 'that is singing and bring' is incorrect; it should be 'singing brings' to agree in number and tense. 'Pray someone's personality by sinking' is incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'appreciate someone's personality through singing' to convey the intended meaning. Pronouns and verb forms are corrected for clarity and grammar.