唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I love singing because it helps me express my feelings and relieves stress after a long day."

範例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me express my feelings and relieves stress after a long day at work.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use simple and clear sentences, and avoid unnecessary details. For example, say "No, I have never learned to sing professionally, but I have watched some singing tutorials on YouTube."

範例: No, I have never learned to sing professionally, but I have watched some singing tutorials on YouTube.

建議: Your answer is too long and contains unclear phrases. Try to be direct and use simple language. For example, say "I want to sing for my family at a special event to show my love and appreciation for them."

範例: I want to sing for my family at a special event to show my love and appreciation for them.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use simple sentences and clear ideas. For example, say "Yes, singing definitely brings happiness because people often sing and dance at joyful events like weddings to express their feelings."

範例: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness because people often sing and dance at joyful events like weddings to express their feelings.

× An singing makes me really stress after a long working hour of my busy schedule.

✓ Singing makes me really stressed after a long working hour of my busy schedule.

The article 'An' is incorrectly used before 'singing' which is a gerund and does not require an article. Also, 'stress' should be 'stressed' to correctly express the feeling.

× No I've never learned how to sing but I have seen some of the classes in YouTube that is over level in the YouTube.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing but I have seen some classes on YouTube that are at an advanced level.

The phrase 'that is over level' is incorrect; it should be 'that are at an advanced level' to correctly describe the classes. Also, 'in YouTube' should be 'on YouTube' as the correct preposition for platforms is 'on'.

× No I've never learned how to sing but I have seen some of the classes in YouTube that is over level in the YouTube.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing but I have seen some classes on YouTube that are at an advanced level.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'YouTube'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to content on a platform.

× Telling about the different frequency of singing.

✓ They talk about the different frequencies of singing.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses 'Telling' incorrectly. Adding 'They talk' provides a clear subject and verb, and 'frequencies' should be plural to match 'different'.

× I love to sing for my family on the event one day as my family has given me every priority in their life.

✓ I love to sing for my family at an event one day as my family has given me every priority in their life.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to an event; 'at' is the correct preposition.

× So singing to them will be your dedication an over a sign of cure and love towards them by expressing it through singing.

✓ So singing to them will be my dedication and a sign of care and love towards them by expressing it through singing.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect as the speaker is referring to themselves; it should be 'my'. Also, 'an over a sign of cure' is incorrect and should be 'a sign of care'.

× Yes, singing or definitely brings happiness to people as we have seen that many peoples loves to sing and dance during happy even such as but they or even marital ceremony.

✓ Yes, singing definitely brings happiness to people as we have seen that many people love to sing and dance during happy events such as birthdays or even marriage ceremonies.

'Peoples' should be 'people' as it is already plural. 'Loves' should be 'love' to agree with plural subject 'people'. 'Even marital ceremony' should be 'marriage ceremonies'.

× So singing else them express their feelings about the joy that they're feeling.

✓ So singing helps them express their feelings about the joy that they're feeling.

The phrase 'singing else them' is incorrect; it should be 'singing helps them' to make a proper sentence.