唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct expressions like 'fond of singing' instead of 'found of singing' and clarify your feelings more naturally. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

範例: No, I'm not particularly fond of singing because I feel shy when I sing in front of people. Therefore, I prefer listening to music rather than singing myself.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, 'formal lessons about singing' instead of 'formal listen at about Cindy'. Also, express your confidence level clearly and avoid repetition.

範例: No, I've never taken formal singing lessons because I am not very confident in my singing ability, so I prefer listening to music instead.

建議: Your answer has good content but is difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Use clearer expressions and linking words to improve coherence. For example, say 'she generally appreciates my singing' and 'she gives me honest feedback, which helps me improve.'

範例: I would like to sing for my sister because she generally appreciates my singing. We often sing online together, and she gives me honest feedback, which helps me improve.

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is confusing due to unclear phrases and incorrect words like 'PayPal' and 'Karaki Kirk'. Use clear examples and correct vocabulary. Also, organize your ideas logically with linking words.

範例: Absolutely yes. Singing can bring happiness to people. For example, karaoke brings joy to many individuals. Some people even sing in the shower because it helps them relax.

× No, I'm not particularly found of singing because when I think in in front of the people I fell shy and embrace it.

✓ No, I'm not particularly fond of singing because when I think in front of people I feel shy and embarrassed.

The word 'found' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'fond' to express liking something. 'Fell' is the past tense of 'fall' but the intended meaning is 'feel' to express emotion. 'Embrace it' is incorrect in this context; 'embarrassed' correctly expresses feeling shy or uncomfortable.

× No, I'm not particularly found of singing because when I think in in front of the people I fell shy and embrace it.

✓ No, I'm not particularly fond of singing because when I think in front of people I feel shy and embarrassed.

The phrase 'in in front of the people' contains a repeated preposition 'in' and the definite article 'the' before 'people' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'in front of people'.

× No, I've never taken a formal listen at about Cindy and I prefer to listen music instead to singing because I I haven't I have not very confident.

✓ No, I've never taken a formal lesson about singing and I prefer to listen to music instead of singing because I am not very confident.

'Listen at about Cindy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'taken a formal lesson about singing'. 'Listen music' should be 'listen to music'. 'Instead to singing' should be 'instead of singing'. 'I haven't I have not very confident' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I am not very confident'.

× No, I've never taken a formal listen at about Cindy and I prefer to listen music instead to singing because I I haven't I have not very confident.

✓ No, I've never taken a formal lesson about singing and I prefer to listen to music instead of singing because I am not very confident.

The preposition 'at' after 'listen' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' after 'listen'. Also, 'instead to' should be 'instead of'.

× I would like to sing it for my sister because, uh, she's generally appreciate in my singing and we have a target on line together at she gives me an honest feedback.

✓ I would like to sing for my sister because she generally appreciates my singing and we have online targets together where she gives me honest feedback.

'Sing it for my sister' is incorrect; 'sing for my sister' is correct. 'She's generally appreciate' should be 'she generally appreciates' to match subject-verb agreement. 'Appreciate in my singing' is incorrect; 'appreciates my singing' is correct. 'We have a target on line together at' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'we have online targets together where'.

× I would like to sing it for my sister because, uh, she's generally appreciate in my singing and we have a target on line together at she gives me an honest feedback.

✓ I would like to sing for my sister because she generally appreciates my singing and we have online targets together where she gives me honest feedback.

The article 'an' before 'honest feedback' is unnecessary because 'feedback' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article here.

× It makes me to improve.

✓ It helps me to improve.

The phrase 'makes me to improve' is incorrect; 'make' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. However, 'helps me to improve' is more appropriate here to express assistance.

× Singing can bring happiness to PayPal.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people.

'PayPal' is a company name and incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'people'.

× For example, Karaki Kirk is a bring joy to many of people.

✓ For example, karaoke is a source of joy to many people.

'Karaki Kirk' is a misspelling of 'karaoke'. 'Is a bring joy' is ungrammatical; it should be 'is a source of joy' or 'brings joy'. 'Many of people' should be 'many people'.

× Some of the people singing in the shower, it's making it make, make it a make is they relax.

✓ Some people sing in the shower; it makes them relax.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Singing' should be 'sing'. 'It's making it make, make it a make is they relax' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'it makes them relax'.