唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
I like singing because I think it can brings me much joy and uh, we can relax ourselves by singing.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
I have learned how to see why I was 10 years old. I think it's of great need to learn how to sing a BIC. AWS singing sounds beautifully. Can lived on someones spreads make them happier?
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
Oh I want to sing for my family and my friends on this people had have a close relationship with me. I want to sing for them to express my hapiness and emotions and to them.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
And definitely singing a beautiful song can make the. Day of people brighten their day and singing songs containing a strong emotions actually will affect people's movement smooth.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 65.0建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和用词不够准确，且有口语填充词“uh”，建议注意语法正确性和避免使用无意义的填充词。
範例: I like singing because it brings me a lot of joy and helps me relax after a busy day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 40.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的时态和词汇。
範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing since I was 10 years old because I believe singing beautifully can make people happier.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，建议简洁明了地表达想为亲近的人唱歌，并注意语法和拼写。
範例: I want to sing for my family and close friends to express my happiness and emotions to them.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 45.0建議: 回答不够连贯且语法错误较多，建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并注意语法和表达的准确性。
範例: Definitely, singing a beautiful song can brighten people's day, and songs with strong emotions can deeply affect their mood.
文法
× I like singing because I think it can brings me much joy and uh, we can relax ourselves by singing.
✓ I like singing because I think it can bring me much joy and uh, we can relax ourselves by singing.
动词bring在第三人称单数时不加s，因为can是情态动词，后面接动词原形。这里错误地使用了brings。
× I have learned how to see why I was 10 years old.
✓ I learned how to sing when I was 10 years old.
句中see应为sing，且时间点是过去，应该用一般过去时learned。
× I think it's of great need to learn how to sing a BIC.
✓ I think it's very important to learn how to sing a bit.
表达“非常重要”时应使用形容词important或副词very，原句用法不正确。
× AWS singing sounds beautifully.
✓ Good singing sounds beautiful.
beautifully是副词，修饰动词，sounds后应接形容词beautiful来描述singing的状态。
× Can lived on someones spreads make them happier?
✓ Can living on someone's spreads make them happier?
句子结构混乱，lived应改为现在分词living，someones应为someone's，表示所有格。
× Oh I want to sing for my family and my friends on this people had have a close relationship with me.
✓ Oh I want to sing for my family and my friends who have a close relationship with me.
使用关系代词who来引导定语从句，原句中on this people结构错误。
× I want to sing for them to express my hapiness and emotions and to them.
✓ I want to sing for them to express my happiness and emotions to them.
hapiness拼写错误，应为happiness；句尾and to them结构不完整，应改为express ... to them。
× And definitely singing a beautiful song can make the. Day of people brighten their day and singing songs containing a strong emotions actually will affect people's movement smooth.
✓ And definitely singing a beautiful song can brighten people's day, and singing songs containing strong emotions will actually affect people's mood smoothly.
句子结构混乱，the. Day of people不完整，应改为brighten people's day；movement应为mood，smooth应为副词smoothly修饰affect。
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