唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your opinion and supporting it with clear reasons. Avoid redundancy and ensure correct sentence structure.

範例: I don't enjoy singing because I think my voice isn't very good. However, I really admire people who can sing well because it takes a lot of skill and practice.

建議: Your answer provides relevant information but is a bit disorganised and contains filler words. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid unnecessary fillers to make your speech more fluent and natural.

範例: Yes, I learned singing when I was about 10 or 11 years old. A talented singer visited my school and taught us some songs. However, I still struggled because I felt my voice wasn't very good.

建議: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Focus on clear sentence structure and correct pronouns. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: If I had the chance, I would love to sing for my mum because she inspires me a lot. Although she has a beautiful voice, she never believed in her singing ability, so I want to encourage her by singing for her.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains pronunciation or word choice errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating the same words. Use linking phrases to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: Personally, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Listening to joyful songs often creates a cheerful atmosphere, which helps improve people's mood and brings joy to their lives.

× I don't like singing that much because I believe that I don't have a good voice, but I love people who sing a song an I admire a lot to the. People who can sing.

✓ I don't like singing that much because I believe that I don't have a good voice, but I love people who sing songs and I admire them a lot. People who can sing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'an' instead of 'and', and 'admire a lot to the. People who can sing' is ungrammatical and unclear. The pronoun 'them' is needed to refer back to 'people who sing songs'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have learned. When I was around your 10 or 11 in my high school, there was a very good singer who used to come to our school and he taught us how to sing a song.

✓ Yes, I have learned. When I was around 10 or 11 in my high school, there was a very good singer who used to come to our school and he taught us how to sing a song.

The phrase 'your 10 or 11' is incorrect; it should be '10 or 11' to indicate the age. The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense usage.

× If I ever get a chance, I'd love to sing a song for my mom because he's a inspiration from for me.

✓ If I ever get a chance, I'd love to sing a song for my mom because she's an inspiration for me.

The pronoun 'he's' is incorrect when referring to 'my mom', which is female. It should be 'she's'. Also, 'a inspiration' should be 'an inspiration' due to vowel sound at the start of 'inspiration'. The phrase 'from for me' is incorrect; 'for me' suffices.

× And I know like see used to have a very good voice, but she never thought she can sing a good song and that's the reason I want to sing a song for her so that she could feel inspired.

✓ And I know she used to have a very good voice, but she never thought she could sing a good song and that's the reason I want to sing a song for her so that she could feel inspired.

The word 'see' is a typo and should be 'she'. Also, 'she never thought she can sing' should be 'she never thought she could sing' to maintain past tense consistency.

× For me personally, I think an I do believe that singing can pink a hapiness to the people.

✓ For me personally, I think and I do believe that singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'an' is incorrect and should be 'and'. 'Pink' is a typo and should be 'bring'. 'Hapiness' is misspelled and should be 'happiness'. 'The people' is better as 'people' in this context.

× Yeah, mostly when you listen to the joyful songs, it brings some cheerful environment.

✓ Yeah, mostly when you listen to joyful songs, it brings a cheerful environment.

The definite article 'the' before 'joyful songs' is unnecessary here. Also, 'some cheerful environment' is better as 'a cheerful environment' to indicate a singular environment created by the songs.

× That's how it brings hapiness are in people's life.

✓ That's how it brings happiness into people's lives.

The phrase 'hapiness are in people's life' is incorrect. 'Hapiness' is misspelled; it should be 'happiness'. 'Are in' is incorrect; 'into' is appropriate to indicate causing happiness. 'People's life' should be plural 'people's lives' to match plural 'people'.