唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и некоторые слова использованы неправильно, например, "sync" вместо "sing" и "thing" вместо "sing". Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные выражения, чтобы ответ был более естественным и понятным.

範例: No, I don't like singing because I can't sing well, but I really enjoy listening to others who have beautiful voices.

建議: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, например, "with SO. Patient" неясно. Следует использовать правильные грамматические конструкции и более точные слова, чтобы сделать ответ понятным и связным.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't have a good voice. However, I have seen some people who are very good at singing and they practice patiently.

建議: В ответе есть опечатка "Warsan" вместо "voices" и некоторые грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать правильные слова и грамматику, а также связные предложения с использованием союзов.

範例: I don't want to sing for anyone because I don't have a good voice, but sometimes I sing with my friends just for fun. I really admire people who have beautiful voices and are talented singers.

建議: Ответ содержит длинные и сложные предложения с некоторыми грамматическими ошибками. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и четкие предложения, а также связующие слова для логичности.

範例: I think singing can bring happiness to many people because it helps them express their feelings. However, some people may not enjoy singing or find it enjoyable.

× No I don't like singing because I can't sync but I like to hear other singing an appreciate really when others thing with so beautiful voice.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I can't sing, but I like to hear others singing and really appreciate it when others sing with such beautiful voices.

The verb 'sync' is incorrect; it should be 'sing'. 'Other singing' should be 'others singing' to indicate people. 'An appreciate really' is incorrect; it should be 'and really appreciate it'. 'Others thing with so beautiful voice' is incorrect; it should be 'others sing with such beautiful voices'. The corrections fix verb forms and noun usage to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× No, I have never learned how to sing because I Can't Sing and I don't have good voice.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I can't sing and I don't have a good voice.

'Can't Sing' should be lowercase 'can't sing' as it is in the middle of the sentence. Also, 'I don't have good voice' is missing the article 'a' before 'good voice'. The corrections fix capitalization and article usage.

× But I have seen some people who are really good in singing and they tried to sing with SO. Patient.

✓ But I have seen some people who are really good at singing and they try to sing with so much patience.

The phrase 'good in singing' should be 'good at singing'. 'Tried to sing with SO. Patient.' is incorrect; it should be 'try to sing with so much patience'. The corrections fix preposition usage and verb tense consistency.

× I don't want to sing for anyone because I don't have good voice, but sometimes when I'm alone with my friends, I sing with them just for fun.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone because I don't have a good voice, but sometimes when I'm alone or with my friends, I sing with them just for fun.

'Good voice' needs the article 'a'. Also, 'alone with my friends' is contradictory; it should be 'alone or with my friends'. The corrections fix article usage and clarify meaning.

× I really admire and appreciate some people who have really good Warsan who are talented singers.

✓ I really admire and appreciate some people who have really good voices and who are talented singers.

'Warsan' is incorrect; it should be 'voices'. The sentence also needs 'and' to connect the two clauses properly. The correction fixes the incorrect word and improves sentence structure.

× I don't really think that singing can bring happiness to almost every person because there may be some people who do not admire singing and cannot just accept it for their hapiness, while there are those who think that singing can bring them happiness.

✓ I don't really think that singing can bring happiness to everyone because there may be some people who do not admire singing and cannot accept it for their happiness, while there are those who think that singing can bring them happiness.

'Almost every person' is better expressed as 'everyone' for clarity. 'Cannot just accept it for their hapiness' should be 'cannot accept it for their happiness'. The corrections improve quantifier usage and spelling.