唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'gives me a piece'. Try to use correct expressions and avoid repetition. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: Yes, I have loved singing since my childhood because it helps me relax and brings me peace of mind.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has multiple grammatical mistakes. Use past tense correctly and avoid repeating phrases. Provide a clear and direct response with supporting details.

範例: Yes, when I was in school, my teacher taught me how to sing, and I took singing classes from a young age.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete or incorrect phrases. Make sure to express your ideas clearly and use proper sentence structure. Also, explain your motivation and future plans coherently.

範例: I want to sing for my mother because she loves singing and has always encouraged me. I am interested in pursuing singing as a career in the future.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear ideas. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons or examples using correct grammar.

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and relieve stress after a tiring day.

× Yes, I love singing from my childhood because it gives me a piece and my my mind will relax after singing songs.

✓ Yes, I have loved singing since my childhood because it gives me peace and my mind relaxes after singing songs.

The word 'piece' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'peace' which means calmness. Also, 'my my mind will relax' has repetition and tense issues; 'my mind relaxes' is the correct present tense form to express habitual action.

× When I'm in school, my teacher tell me how to learn how to learn singing and I will take I was taking classes from my childhood of singing.

✓ When I was in school, my teacher told me how to learn singing and I took classes from my childhood to learn singing.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I'm in school' should be 'I was in school' to indicate past time. 'Tell' should be 'told' for past tense. 'I will take I was taking' is incorrect; 'I took' is the correct past tense. Also, 'how to learn how to learn singing' is redundant; simplified to 'how to learn singing'.

× My mother encouraged me for singing because ** *** also loves singing Zahn. I also interested in this profession and it billed me a career in my future.

✓ My mother encouraged me to sing because she also loves singing. I am also interested in this profession and it will build a career for me in the future.

The phrase '** ***' is unclear and replaced with 'she' as the correct pronoun. 'Encouraged me for singing' should be 'encouraged me to sing' as the correct preposition and verb form. 'I also interested' lacks the verb 'am'. 'It billed me a career' is incorrect; 'it will build a career for me' is correct future tense and meaning.

× Yes, definitely singing bring happiness to people do to singing people cannot feel relax and then people are tired daily Sing a song and also sing while.

✓ Yes, definitely singing brings happiness to people because singing helps people relax, especially when they are tired daily. People sing songs and also sing while working.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. 'Do to' is incorrect; 'because' is appropriate. 'People cannot feel relax' should be 'people cannot relax' or 'feel relaxed'. The sentence structure is fragmented and unclear; it is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.