唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有很多语法和表达错误，导致意思不清晰。建议你用简单明了的句子表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复和不必要的内容。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy. However, I am not very good at it, so sometimes I feel a bit shy to sing in front of others.

建議: 你的回答语法混乱，表达不清。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明原因，使用连贯的句子。

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing properly. I had a chance to learn before, but I was busy learning the piano at that time.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议直接回答不想为谁唱歌的原因，并用简单句子表达感受。

範例: Honestly, I don't want to sing for anyone because I am not good at singing. Once, when I sang in front of my friends, they said I needed more practice, which made me feel sad.

建議: 回答表达不完整且有语法错误。建议用完整句子表达唱歌带来快乐的原因，并举例说明。

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For me, singing helps me relax and feel better when I am stressed.

× Yes, I really like seeing but I'm not good at it seem so if I seeing it from the my friend family are they will talk tell me I need required that so very undermined my confidence.

✓ Yes, I really like singing but I'm not good at it. It seems that when I sing in front of my friends and family, they tell me I need to improve, which has really undermined my confidence.

这里的动词形式错误，'seeing' 应为 'singing'，且动词 'seem' 应用第三人称单数形式 'seems'。此外，句子结构混乱，需调整以表达清晰。建议注意动词的正确形式和句子结构。

× No I haven't, but at before I have the chins I had a change to seem the. To learning the scene, but at that time I don't have enough time because I also need the needed to learn the piano.

✓ No, I haven't, but before I had the chance to see it. I wanted to learn singing, but at that time I didn't have enough time because I also needed to learn the piano.

句中时态混用且错误，如 'have the chins' 应为 'had the chance'，'seem the' 应为 'see it'，'don't have' 应为过去式 'didn't have'，'need the needed' 应为 'needed'。建议注意时态一致性和正确的词汇使用。

× To be honest that I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at to same and add before I seen in front of my friend and they tell me I need required that make me very sad and list. 10s.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at singing. Before, I sang in front of my friends and they told me I needed to improve, which made me very sad and lost confidence.

'not good at to same' 应为 'not good at singing'，'seen' 应为过去式 'sang'，'tell me I need required' 应为 'told me I needed'。动词形式和时态错误导致表达不清，建议加强动词形式和时态的学习。

× I think so because for me, seeing how help me to relax and pick me up. So I think, uh, it is seemed to other people an.

✓ I think so because, for me, singing helps me to relax and pick me up. So I think it is the same for other people.

'seeing' 应为 'singing'，'help' 应用第三人称单数 'helps'，'it is seemed' 应为 'it is the same'。动词形式和句子结构错误，建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性。