唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: In your answer, try to use correct tense and avoid adding unrelated questions. Also, keep your answer clear and concise, focusing on why you like singing. For example, say 'I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed.'

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed. It is a good way to express my emotions and feel happier.

建議: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. Also, explain clearly how you learned singing and what resources you used. For example, say 'Yes, I have learned how to sing by watching tutorials on YouTube and using websites that teach singing techniques.'

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing by watching tutorials on YouTube and using websites that teach singing techniques. These resources helped me understand the lyrics and improve my voice.

建議: Make sure your sentences are clear and grammatically correct. Explain why you want to sing for your mom with specific reasons. For example, say 'I want to sing for my mom because she is very special to me and always supports me when I face difficulties.'

範例: I want to sing for my mom because she is very special to me. She always supports and encourages me when I face challenges and helps me achieve my goals.

建議: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid unclear or incorrect words. Explain how singing brings happiness with specific reasons. For example, say 'Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their feelings and connect with others.'

範例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their feelings and connect with others. Singing with loved ones can create joyful and memorable moments.

× Yes, I like singing because it made me feel relaxed when I feel stressed all.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel relaxed when I feel stressed.

The sentence mixes past tense 'made' with present tense 'feel'. Since the context is about a general truth or habit, present tense 'makes' should be used to maintain consistency.

× Do you like From the World?

✓ Do you like songs from around the world?

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'songs' and 'around the world' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes I have a I have ever learned how to sing because I have learn from YouTube and website.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing because I have learned from YouTube and websites.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect verb forms. 'Have a I have ever learned' is incorrect and 'have learn' should be 'have learned' to match present perfect tense.

× They provide me more to know about the lyrics of the song.

✓ They provide me with more information about the lyrics of the song.

The phrase 'provide me more to know' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'provide me with more information' to indicate receiving additional knowledge.

× I want to sing for my mom because my mom is a special for person for me.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because she is a special person to me.

The phrase 'a special for person' is incorrect. The correct adjective-noun order is 'a special person', and 'for me' should be 'to me' to express personal significance.

× She always incorrect incorrect me when I'm first trust an cannot go in the future an cannot go with my goal.

✓ She always corrects me when I make mistakes and encourages me to pursue my goals in the future.

The original sentence is unclear and contains repeated words and incorrect phrases. Rewriting it clarifies the intended meaning and corrects grammar.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it can make people too fierce.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it can make people feel joyful.

The word 'fierce' is incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is likely 'happy' or 'joyful', so replacing 'too fierce' with 'feel joyful' corrects the error.

× Realize Ann. He and I can sing with the the person that they love.

✓ Also, he and I can sing with the people we love.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it improves clarity and corrects sentence structure.

× Ann can have dumb to know about the.

✓ And can have the chance to get to know each other better.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains incorrect words. The correction provides a meaningful and grammatically correct sentence.