唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases like 'singlish Karen Ohdela' and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. For example, I often sing songs by my favorite singer, Karen Ohdela, which makes me feel happy and calm.

建議: Your answer should be more precise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add details using linking words. Avoid repetition like 'know how to learn how to sing'.

範例: Yes, I have taken singing classes when I was in school. These classes helped me understand the basics of singing and improve my voice.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please give a direct response to the question and explain your reason with specific details. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I want to sing for my mother because she has always supported my dreams. Singing for her would make her happy and proud.

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific examples. Use correct vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people because there are many types of songs, such as romantic and action songs. These songs can lift people's moods and make them feel joyful.

× Yes, I love singing my favorite singlish Karen Ohdela and I listened so much their songs that's why I looked like to sing song and I feel relaxed after singing.

✓ Yes, I love singing my favorite English songs by Karen Ohdela and I have listened to their songs so much; that's why I like to sing songs and I feel relaxed after singing.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage such as 'singlish' instead of 'English', and 'looked like to sing song' which is incorrect. Also, 'listened so much their songs' lacks proper prepositions and verb forms. Correcting pronouns and verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I take classes when I am in school, that's why I know how to learn how to sing a song.

✓ Yes, I took classes when I was in school; that's why I know how to sing a song.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'take' and 'am' when referring to past events. Using past tense 'took' and 'was' correctly reflects the time frame of the action.

× That's why I cannot ignore my mother's. Dreamed so I want to launching.

✓ That's why I cannot ignore my mother's dream, so I want to launch it.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and noun usage such as 'mother's.' and 'Dreamed'. Also, 'want to launching' is incorrect verb form. Correcting pronouns and verb forms clarifies meaning and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, singing always can bring happiness to people becauses there are so many type of songs like Romantic said an action songs.

✓ Yes, singing can always bring happiness to people because there are so many types of songs like romantic, sad, and action songs.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'so many type' instead of 'so many types' and has spelling errors like 'becauses'. Correcting quantifiers and spelling improves grammatical correctness.

× That's why people feel this thing that and they can easily they can feel hapiness always.

✓ That's why people feel this and can easily feel happiness always.

The sentence has redundant and unclear structure such as 'feel this thing that' and repeated phrases. Simplifying the sentence structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.