唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体原因支持。例如，可以先直接回答喜欢或不喜欢，然后说明原因。

範例: I don't like singing because I find it difficult to learn, and I feel very shy performing in front of many people.

建議: 回答中出现了词汇错误（sleep代替sing），语法混乱，表达不连贯。建议注意词汇准确性，使用正确时态，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I have never learned how to sing because I think it is difficult to improve my skills, and I feel nervous performing in front of many people.

建議: 回答内容不明确且有多处词汇错误，建议先明确回答问题，再用具体理由支持，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

範例: I don't want to sing for anyone because I feel shy and think singing is difficult.

建議: 回答中有严重语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议先明确表达观点，然后用具体理由或例子支持，注意句子结构和词汇准确。

範例: I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and enjoy music.

× I don't like singing because I think she is difficult for me to study it and I think I will very shy things before a lot of people, so I don't like things.

✓ I don't like singing because I think it is difficult for me to learn, and I think I will be very shy in front of a lot of people, so I don't like it.

这里'singing'用法正确，但原句中'she is difficult'应为'it is difficult'，因为指代的是唱歌这个动作，属于非人称。'study it'不合适，应该用'learn'。'I will very shy things'结构错误，应该是'I will be very shy'。需要用动词be加形容词。

× I have never learned how to sleep because I think it's difficult to learn and improve my skills. I feel very nervous when I had to perform in front of many people. So I have never learns to say.

✓ I have never learned how to sing because I think it's difficult to learn and improve my skills. I feel very nervous when I have to perform in front of many people. So I have never learned to sing.

'learned'是过去分词，正确。'sleep'应为'sing'，语义错误。'I had to perform'时态不对，应该用现在完成时或一般现在时，'I have to perform'。'have never learns'中'learns'应为'learned'，保持时态一致。

× I don't want to simple because I think thing is very bad thing and it's very difficult. I will never I will very shy to perform in front of many people, so I don't want to sample.

✓ I don't want to sing because I think singing is a very bad thing and it's very difficult. I will never perform because I will be very shy in front of many people, so I don't want to sing.

'simple'和'sample'用错，应该是'sing'。'thing is very bad thing'重复且不通顺，应改为'singing is a very bad thing'。'I will very shy'缺少动词be，应为'I will be very shy'。

× I don't think CNN Capri happiness to people just for me, I don't think it. I think it is a very difficult, so it makes people feel bad. So I think it singing concert bring happiness to people.

✓ I don't think singing can bring happiness to people, just for me, I don't think so. I think it is very difficult, so it makes people feel bad. So I don't think singing concerts bring happiness to people.

'CNN Capri happiness'是拼写错误，应为'singing can bring happiness'。'I don't think it'应为'I don't think so'。'it is a very difficult'缺少名词，应为'it is very difficult'. 'it singing concert bring'语法错误，应为'singing concerts bring'。