唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really like singing because I have enjoyed it since I was a child. Whenever I hear a song I like, I try to imitate the singer's voice. I often sing when I am taking a bath because it helps me relax.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing. I usually sing casually for fun, and I haven't felt the need to take singing lessons yet.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản và giải thích lý do cụ thể. Hãy tránh những câu không liên quan và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: I prefer to sing for myself because I feel shy when others hear my voice. For example, I often sing when I am alone at home.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích rõ ràng và sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng của mình.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relieve stress. When people sing, they can express their emotions and feel more relaxed.

× I really like singing since I was a kid after after hearing any sounds that I like, I often copy the way the singer saw the single sing a song in I often a thing when I. Well, I'm taking bath.

✓ I have really liked singing since I was a kid. After hearing any sounds that I like, I often copy the way the singer sings a song. I often do this when I am taking a bath.

The original sentence has issues with verb forms and sentence structure. 'I really like singing since I was a kid' should be 'I have really liked singing since I was a kid' to express an action continuing from the past to present (present perfect tense). 'The singer saw the single sing a song' is incorrect; it should be 'the singer sings a song' to use the correct present tense and verb form. Also, 'I'm taking bath' should be 'I am taking a bath' with the article 'a'. The sentence is fragmented and needs to be split for clarity.

× Actually I just sing like randomly. I don't have any technique or I don't have any motivation to learn. To tally. About singing.

✓ Actually, I just sing randomly. I don't have any technique or motivation to learn, totally about singing.

The phrase 'like randomly' is informal and redundant; 'just sing randomly' is clearer. 'To tally' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'totally'. The sentence 'To tally. About singing.' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'totally about singing' to express the intended meaning. Present tense is used correctly here, but sentence structure and word choice need improvement.

× I'm kind of sorry for singing for all the people, so that's why I just wanna sing for myself. Well, I'm taking back so no one can hear my voice is kind of our work when people hear your voice, right?

✓ I'm kind of sorry to sing for all the people, so that's why I just want to sing for myself. Well, I'm taking a bath so no one can hear my voice. It's kind of awkward when people hear your voice, right?

The pronoun usage and sentence structure are incorrect. 'Sorry for singing for all the people' should be 'sorry to sing for all the people'. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is more appropriate. 'I'm taking back' is a typo for 'I'm taking a bath'. The sentence 'no one can hear my voice is kind of our work' is unclear and corrected to 'no one can hear my voice. It's kind of awkward when people hear your voice.' Pronouns and sentence clarity are improved.

× Yes, but. Because when they saying they can release some stress, especially when this thing in sound does have a lot of hyenas, hyenas. So they will swim as much as possible to cast the north. So they will release all the stress they have to keep in this step in keeping their body. So I think the most.

✓ Yes, because when they sing, they can release some stress, especially when this thing in sound has a lot of high notes. So they will sing as much as possible to cast the notes. This way, they will release all the stress they have and keep their body healthy. So I think that's the most important.

The original sentence has many errors including verb forms and unclear words. 'When they saying' should be 'when they sing' (present tense). 'This thing in sound does have a lot of hyenas' is likely a mishearing; corrected to 'this thing in sound has a lot of high notes'. 'Swim as much as possible to cast the north' is nonsensical; corrected to 'sing as much as possible to cast the notes'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct verb usage.