唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially the phrase "I have my own karaoke at" which seems unfinished. Try to give a clear and complete response with a topic sentence and supporting details, avoiding redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing very much because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I often sing at home using my karaoke machine, which makes the experience more fun. I also like listening to my voice as it boosts my confidence.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and repetitions. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and logical.

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing. During my elementary and middle school years, I attended regular singing classes where we practiced together as a group. These classes helped me improve my vocal skills and confidence.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and provide specific examples using linking words to make your answer coherent and meaningful.

範例: I like to sing for people who can be moved by my voice. For example, when I sang at my best friend's wedding, she was so touched that she cried. That moment was very emotional for both of us.

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but could be improved by avoiding repetition and structuring your response more clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

範例: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to people. I feel joyful when I sing myself, and listening to artists like Ariana Grande and The Weeknd also lifts my mood. Therefore, singing and music have a positive impact on emotions.

× Yes, I do enjoy singing. I have my own karaoke at The reason I like singing is because I think I'm good, quite good at it.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy singing. I have my own karaoke machine. The reason I like singing is because I think I'm quite good at it.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'I have my own karaoke at' is incomplete and confusing. Adding 'machine' completes the thought. Also, 'I think I'm good, quite good at it' is better expressed as 'I think I'm quite good at it' for natural English flow.

× To learn how to sing. Yes, I have a learn how to sing.

✓ To learn how to sing? Yes, I have learned how to sing.

The phrase 'I have a learn how to sing' is grammatically incorrect. The correct past participle form 'learned' should be used with 'have' to form the present perfect tense, indicating experience.

× Making my elementary, middle school, there were there were a lot of singing classes.

✓ During my elementary and middle school years, there were a lot of singing classes.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('there were there were'). It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It wasn't even just a course, it was a Lego regular and we sang together.

✓ It wasn't just a course; it was a regular activity, and we sang together.

'Lego regular' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The sentence needs to be rephrased to convey that singing was a regular activity, not just a course.

× I do like to sing for somebody could be touched my voice.

✓ I do like to sing for somebody who could be touched by my voice.

The original sentence lacks the relative pronoun 'who' and the preposition 'by' to correctly link the clauses and express the passive meaning.

× For instance when I was singing at my best friends wedding she was a crying over my seeing an It also touched me so much.

✓ For instance, when I was singing at my best friend's wedding, she was crying over my singing. It also touched me so much.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'best friends' should be possessive 'best friend's'; 'was a crying' should be 'was crying'; 'over my seeing an' is incorrect and should be 'over my singing'. The sentence is corrected for tense and clarity.

× Because I know I feel happiness when I sing and when I listen to people singing like especially Ariana Grande music, like weekend music, of course it brings me happiness.

✓ Because I know I feel happiness when I sing and when I listen to people singing, especially Ariana Grande's music and The Weeknd's music; of course, it brings me happiness.

The original sentence misuses 'like' and lacks possessive forms for artists' names. 'Like' should be replaced with 'especially' for emphasis, and possessive forms are needed for proper nouns. Also, 'weekend' should be 'The Weeknd', the artist's name.