唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant phrases like 'a lie' and 'moving ahead', and provide specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it is my favourite hobby. When I was in class 10, my music teacher taught me many songs, which helped me improve my singing skills.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and provide specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. My music teacher in class 10 taught me various songs, which helped me understand different singing techniques.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to explain your reason more effectively.

範例: To be honest, if I get a chance, I would like to sing for my father because he has worked very hard and dedicated himself to giving me a better life.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Use proper sentence structures and linking words to connect your points. Be specific about how singing brings happiness.

範例: Of course, singing brings happiness because it is the best way to express our feelings. Moreover, singing can reduce stress hormones, which helps people feel relaxed and joyful.

× Well, a lie. Singing because it's a hobby to me.

✓ Well, I like singing because it's a hobby for me.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. 'A lie' is incorrect and does not fit the context. The phrase 'Singing because it's a hobby to me' is a fragment and needs a subject and verb. Correcting it to 'I like singing because it's a hobby for me' forms a complete and clear sentence.

× Moving ahead, when I was in class 10th my music teacher used to teach me how to sing a majority a song.

✓ Moving ahead, when I was in class 10th, my music teacher used to teach me how to sing most songs.

The phrase 'a majority a song' is incorrect. 'Majority' is a quantifier and should be followed by 'of' and a plural noun. Here, 'most songs' is more appropriate. Also, a comma is needed after 'class 10th' for clarity.

× Of course, as I mentioned above, my music teacher in class 10 used to teach me how to sing.

✓ Of course, as I mentioned above, my music teacher in class 10 used to teach me how to sing.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the past tense context. No correction needed.

× That time I get to know how to sing middle yeah song.

✓ At that time, I got to know how to sing medium-paced songs.

The original sentence has incorrect verb tense ('get' instead of 'got') and unclear phrase 'middle yeah song'. 'Medium-paced songs' is a clearer expression. Also, 'At that time' is a better phrase to indicate past time.

× To be honest, if I get a chance, I will sing for my father because he has done very hard work and dedicate me to make my best life.

✓ To be honest, if I get a chance, I will sing for my father because he has worked very hard and dedicated himself to making my life the best.

The phrase 'has done very hard work' is awkward; 'has worked very hard' is better. 'Dedicate me' is incorrect; it should be 'dedicated himself'. Also, 'to make my best life' is unclear; 'to making my life the best' is more natural. The modal verb usage is correct but the verb forms need correction.

× Of course is singing brings happiness and gated because I think it is best way to express our feeling.

✓ Of course, singing brings happiness and joy because I think it is the best way to express our feelings.

The phrase 'is singing brings' is incorrect; it should be 'singing brings'. 'Gated' is likely a typo for 'joy'. 'Best way' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context.

× Moving ahead, singing also reduce the stress hormones.

✓ Moving ahead, singing also reduces stress hormones.

The verb 'reduce' should be in third person singular form 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, 'the stress hormones' can be simplified to 'stress hormones' unless referring to specific hormones.