唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, say "I like singing, but I'm not confident in my singing ability, so I usually prefer listening to singing."

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax, but I'm not very confident in my singing skills, so I mostly listen to music instead.

建議: Answer the question directly and use correct expressions. Avoid unclear phrases like "I haven't come" and "I'm not fun of singing." Instead, say "No, I haven't learned how to sing. I'm not a big fan of singing and prefer listening to music."

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I'm not very interested in singing; I prefer listening to music.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, "Although I'm not confident in my singing abilities, I would like to sing for my partner and family because I believe it's a good way to express feelings and romance."

範例: Although I'm not confident in my singing abilities, I would like to sing for my partner and family because I think it's a lovely way to express emotions and show affection.

建議: Provide a clear and coherent answer with linking words. Avoid unclear and incomplete sentences. For example, "Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their feelings and release positive energy."

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and release positive energy, which makes them feel better.

× I like singing but I'm not confident in my single ability.

✓ I like singing but I'm not confident in my singing ability.

The word 'single' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'singing ability' to refer to the skill of singing. 'Single' is an adjective meaning one, which does not fit the context.

× So yes, most of my tie I refer listening than singing.

✓ So yes, most of the time I prefer listening to singing.

The phrase 'most of my tie' is incorrect; it should be 'most of the time'. Also, 'refer listening than singing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prefer listening to singing' because 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two activities.

× No, I haven't come.

✓ No, I haven't learned.

The phrase 'I haven't come' is incorrect in this context. The question is about learning to sing, so the correct response is 'I haven't learned' or 'I haven't taken lessons'.

× I'm not fun of singing.

✓ I'm not fond of singing.

The word 'fun' is a noun meaning enjoyment, but the correct adjective to express liking something is 'fond'. Therefore, 'I'm not fond of singing' is correct.

× I refer listening to music rather than singing.

✓ I prefer listening to music rather than singing.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'prefer' to express liking one thing more than another.

× even that I am not confident in my singing abilities,

✓ even though I am not confident in my singing ability,

The phrase 'even that' is incorrect; it should be 'even though' to express contrast. Also, 'singing abilities' can be singular 'singing ability' when referring to the general skill.

× 'Cause from my opinion is a good way to extract the feeling, the romantic.

✓ 'Cause in my opinion, it is a good way to express feelings and romance.

The phrase 'from my opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in my opinion'. 'Extract the feeling, the romantic' is awkward; 'express feelings and romance' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, of course singing is a. A good way to spread the feeling to print out the positive energy.

✓ Yes, of course, singing is a good way to spread feelings and express positive energy.

The sentence is fragmented and awkward. 'To print out the positive energy' is incorrect; 'express positive energy' is appropriate. Also, 'spread the feeling' should be plural 'spread feelings'.

× Uhm, is the why is your why too like? Uhm. Release the energy inside.

✓ Uhm, that is why I like it too. Uhm, it helps release the energy inside.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected version clarifies the meaning and uses proper sentence structure.