唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复和拼写错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，注意语法和拼写，表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Since I was a child, singing has been my favorite way to escape from the pressures of life and work, especially when I have many tasks to complete.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的语法结构，避免重复，表达更简洁明了。

範例: No, I have never had professional singing lessons. However, singing is my favorite hobby, so I often listen to a song many times until I can sing it well, which makes me very happy.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法和拼写错误。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，句子结构更完整，表达更自然。

範例: I would like to sing for my mom because she is one of the most important people in my life. If I have the chance, I would write an original song and sing it for her.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的单复数形式，避免拼写错误，句子更连贯自然。

範例: Yes, absolutely. Singing is an emotional activity that can influence people's feelings, such as happiness or sadness. However, most of the time, I believe a good song should bring happiness to people. That's why I love music.

× I was king on singing and music since I was a child because I sing sing a song can help me relax my mind an help me to escape the pressure of life and work such as in recently I have two many work to do because the academic project.

✓ I have been keen on singing and music since I was a child because singing a song can help me relax my mind and help me escape the pressure of life and work. Recently, I have had too much work to do because of the academic project.

句中“was king”应为“have been keen”，表示从过去持续到现在的状态，需用现在完成时。"sing sing a song"应为"singing a song"，动名词形式。"an help me"应为"and help me"，连词and拼写错误。"in recently"应为"Recently"，副词用法。"two many work"应为"too much work"，量词和形容词错误。"because the academic project"应为"because of the academic project"，介词使用错误。

× No, I never learned how to sing an without any professional instructions, but saying is my favorite hobby so sometimes I will listen a song for many many times until I can sing it well an that will make me happy NIS.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing without any professional instructions, but singing is my favorite hobby, so sometimes I will listen to a song many times until I can sing it well, and that will make me happy.

"never learned"应使用现在完成时"have never learned"，表示经历。"an without"应为"without"，多余冠词。"saying"应为"singing"，拼写错误。"listen a song"应为"listen to a song"，动词搭配错误。"for many many times"应为"many times"，多余介词。"an that"应为"and that"，拼写错误。"NIS"无意义，应删除。

× Maybe the answer is my mom because I saying my mother is one of the most important people to me in the world.

✓ Maybe the answer is my mom because I think my mother is one of the most important people to me in the world.

"I saying"应为"I think"，动词形式错误。此处应使用一般现在时表达观点。

× So if I have an opportunity I would like to write original song and sing it for my mom.

✓ So if I have an opportunity, I would like to write an original song and sing it for my mom.

"write original song"缺少冠词，应为"write an original song"，表示单数可数名词前需要冠词。

× Yes absolutely singing is emotional activities and it can have great influence to peoples might such as hapiness, sadness.

✓ Yes, absolutely, singing is an emotional activity and it can have a great influence on people's moods such as happiness and sadness.

"emotional activities"应为单数"emotional activity"，因为singing作为整体活动。"influence to peoples might"应为"influence on people's moods"，介词和名词形式错误。"hapiness"拼写错误，应为"happiness"。

× But the most time I think a good Psalm should bring hapiness to person.

✓ But most of the time, I think a good song should bring happiness to a person.

"the most time"应为"most of the time"，固定表达。"Psalm"应为"song"，语义错误。"hapiness"拼写错误，应为"happiness"。"to person"应为"to a person"，缺少冠词。