唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons or examples. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it has been a big part of my life since childhood. Singing loudly makes me feel happy and relaxed, and I often sing when I am alone or with friends.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Directly answer the question first, then add supporting details with linking words. Use clear vocabulary and correct grammar.

範例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have always enjoyed singing on my own since I was a child. It has always made me feel happy and confident.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your idea with specific details. Use appropriate vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I would like to sing for a large audience, perhaps at charity events such as cancer fundraisers, because it would be rewarding to entertain people while supporting a good cause.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Give a clear opinion first, then explain why with specific reasons or examples, using linking words.

範例: Definitely, I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to anyone who listens. It can lift people's spirits and create a joyful atmosphere.

× I love singing, I used to seeing a lot since my I.

✓ I love singing, I used to see a lot since I was young.

The phrase 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'used to seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'used to see'. Also, 'since my I' is unclear and likely a typo; it is corrected to 'since I was young' to make sense.

× I have been singing loud since my childhood and makes me happy whenever so very important part of my life.

✓ I have been singing loudly since my childhood and it makes me happy; it is a very important part of my life.

The adverb 'loud' should be 'loudly' to modify the verb 'singing'. Also, the sentence lacks a subject for 'makes me happy'; adding 'it' clarifies the subject. The phrase 'whenever so very important part of my life' is ungrammatical and is corrected to 'it is a very important part of my life' for clarity and correctness.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I will see who since my childhood.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I have been singing since my childhood.

The phrase 'I will see who' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning seems to be that the student has been singing since childhood, so the present perfect continuous tense 'have been singing' is appropriate here.

× So he has become my very happy.

✓ So it has made me very happy.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'He has become my very happy' does not make sense. The intended meaning is likely that singing has made the student happy, so the corrected sentence reflects this with proper structure.

× I want to sing for at large law larger audience.

✓ I want to sing for a large audience.

The phrase 'at large law larger audience' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'for' when indicating the audience one sings to, and 'a large audience' is the correct noun phrase.

× Like cancer or something like that.

✓ Like charity events or something like that.

The word 'cancer' alone is unclear and inappropriate as an example of an audience. It is better to specify 'charity events' or similar to clarify the context.

× Definitely singing can pretty much lot of happiness to wherever whoever. He is listening to.

✓ Definitely, singing can bring a lot of happiness to whoever is listening.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Pretty much lot of happiness' is incorrect; 'bring a lot of happiness' is correct. Also, 'wherever whoever. He is listening to' is fragmented and unclear; it is corrected to 'whoever is listening' for clarity and grammatical correctness.