唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I definitely like singing because it helps me relieve stress. Whenever I feel overwhelmed, singing a song calms me down and lifts my mood.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to make your response more natural and effective. Also, be specific about when and how you learned to sing.

範例: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. After my classes finished, I used to take lessons from my music teacher who taught me the basics of singing.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question first, then add supporting details using linking words. Use more precise vocabulary to express your feelings.

範例: I want to sing for my mother because she loves me unconditionally. Singing for her is my way of showing gratitude and affection.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Focus on clear sentence structure, use linking words, and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

範例: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people. When they sing, they feel joyful and energetic, which makes their life more enjoyable. I believe singing also helps express one's personality.

× Hi, yes definitely I like singing 'cause whenever I feel the stress I always sing a song with give me relief from my stress.

✓ Hi, yes definitely I like singing 'cause whenever I feel stressed I always sing a song that gives me relief from my stress.

The phrase 'with give me relief' is incorrect. The correct form is 'that gives me relief' because 'gives' agrees with the singular noun 'song'. Also, 'feel the stress' should be 'feel stressed' to correctly express the state of experiencing stress.

× Yes, whenever I was sitting in my class ended on time.

✓ Yes, whenever my class ended on time, I was sitting in it.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense usage. 'Was sitting in my class ended on time' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is to say 'whenever my class ended on time, I was sitting in it' to express the past continuous action during the class ending.

× On that time, I learned from my music teacher at how to sing.

✓ At that time, I learned from my music teacher how to sing.

The phrase 'On that time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'At that time'. Also, 'at how to sing' is incorrect; 'how to sing' should not be preceded by 'at'.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This is the examiner's question and is grammatically correct, so no correction is needed.

× Well, my mother is so loyal toward me 'cause she loves me a lot. An whenever she loves me, I always sing a song for her.

✓ Well, my mother is very loyal to me because she loves me a lot. And whenever she loves me, I always sing a song for her.

The word 'An' is a typo and should be 'And'. Also, 'loyal toward me' is better expressed as 'loyal to me'. Using 'because' instead of the informal ''cause' improves formality.

× Definitely singing can bega happiness toward the masses as this sing a song they feel a come and make their life enjoyable and they always feel energetic while singer singing amusing in their life and I saw that so I think that singing I'm using can announce their personality.

✓ Definitely, singing can bring happiness to the masses because when they sing a song, they feel joy and it makes their life enjoyable. They always feel energetic while singing, which is amusing in their life. I have seen that, so I think that singing can enhance their personality.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'bega' should be 'bring' (verb form), 'as this sing a song' is incorrect and should be 'because when they sing a song', 'feel a come' is incorrect and should be 'feel joy', 'while singer singing amusing' is incorrect and should be 'while singing, which is amusing'. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be broken into clearer parts for better understanding.