唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it lacks clarity and coherence. Try to make your sentences more structured and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax. Whenever I feel bored or stressed, I like to sing to lift my mood. Singing is a great way for me to express myself and feel happier.

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more organized. Avoid fragmented sentences and provide specific details about your learning experience. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and easy to follow.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school. During that time, I participated in various singing competitions every year, which helped me improve my skills. I also learned different types of songs and techniques from my music teacher.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Avoid unrelated or confusing phrases and use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I would love to sing for my parents because they have always supported me. Singing in front of them makes me feel confident and happy. Their encouragement motivates me to improve my singing skills.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Make sure to finish your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. In today's busy world, many people feel stressed and have little time for relaxation. Singing allows them to express their emotions and relieve stress, which improves their mood and overall well-being.

× Yes, I'm a big fan of singing because I find myself relaxed after I sing a lot of most of the time when I feel bored or I have I have some. Says so. I would like to do singing at that time.

✓ Yes, I'm a big fan of singing because I find myself relaxed after singing a lot most of the time when I feel bored or have some free time. So, I would like to sing at that time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I sing a lot of most of the time' which is awkward and ungrammatical. Using the present participle 'singing' after 'after' is correct to indicate the action that causes relaxation. Also, 'I have some. Says so.' is unclear and likely a misstatement; it is corrected to 'have some free time' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Definitely, I have learned the singing during my school time. So at that time we performed, I performed A various competitions every year later the singing such as points, songs. And. Other SO. I learned at that time.

✓ Definitely, I learned singing during my school time. At that time, I performed in various competitions every year, such as singing contests and other events. I learned a lot then.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'I have learned' is changed to simple past 'I learned' to match the past time reference. 'A various competitions' is incorrect; 'various competitions' is correct. The phrase 'later the singing such as points, songs. And. Other SO.' is unclear and corrected to 'such as singing contests and other events' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Tell me a list. I would love to sing for my parents because I always met when I was a child. I always prefer to sing in front of them because I have my boss wasn't very sweet Ann Gordon singing. So when I was cursing in front of my parents, I feel very confident.

✓ To be honest, I would love to sing for my parents because I always met them when I was a child. I always preferred to sing in front of them because my parents were very sweet and encouraging. So when I was singing in front of my parents, I felt very confident.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronoun usage and phrases. 'Tell me a list' is unclear and replaced with 'To be honest'. 'I always met' is corrected to 'I always met them' to include the object pronoun. 'I have my boss wasn't very sweet Ann Gordon singing' is nonsensical and corrected to 'my parents were very sweet and encouraging'. 'Cursing' is a wrong word here, replaced with 'singing'. Verb tenses are adjusted for consistency.

× Oh definitely, I think so. Thinking can bring happiness to people because. In this modern world, everyone is busy within their work schedule as well as in the personal life, so they do not have much time to spend in the outdoor activities or even for the creativity. So according to me, to get it from stress and.

✓ Oh definitely, I think so. Singing can bring happiness to people because in this modern world, everyone is busy with their work schedule as well as their personal life, so they do not have much time to spend on outdoor activities or even for creativity. So according to me, it helps to relieve stress.

The original sentence misuses prepositions such as 'busy within' which should be 'busy with', and 'spend in the outdoor activities' which should be 'spend on outdoor activities'. Also, 'Thinking' is corrected to 'Singing' to match the context. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.