唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: I don't really like singing, but I enjoy listening to songs. However, if I get a chance, I would definitely try to sing.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use simple sentences. Avoid filler words and repetitions to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: I have never tried to learn singing because I am a shy person and not confident about my voice. That's why I haven't taken any singing lessons.

建議: Your answer shows emotion but is a bit repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to express your feelings clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: If I get a chance to sing for someone, I would sing for my future wife because I love her deeply and want to express my feelings through song.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear due to repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to use clear sentences and appropriate vocabulary to explain your thoughts effectively.

範例: Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it allows us to express our emotions through lyrics, which we might not be able to share otherwise.

× I prefers to listen song, but I do not like singing.

✓ I prefer to listen to songs, but I do not like singing.

The verb 'prefer' should be in base form 'prefer' with the subject 'I' (first person singular), not 'prefers' which is for third person singular. Also, 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' and 'song' should be plural 'songs' to indicate general preference.

× I prefers to listen song, but I do not like singing.

✓ I prefer to listen to songs, but I do not like singing.

The verb 'listen' is always followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating what is being listened to. Missing 'to' is a preposition error.

× I didn't ever try to learn.

✓ I have never tried to learn.

The sentence refers to an experience up to now, so present perfect tense 'have never tried' is more appropriate than simple past 'didn't ever try'.

× You seem.

✓ You seem so.

The sentence 'You seem.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'so' clarifies the meaning, making it a complete sentence.

× that's why I didn't ever tried to say, learn a song.

✓ that's why I never tried to learn a song.

After 'didn't' the verb should be in base form 'try', not past tense 'tried'. Also, 'to say, learn a song' is awkward; 'to learn a song' is sufficient.

× If I get a chance to sing for someone, I will definitely sing for my wife because when I I will get married, I love.

✓ If I get a chance to sing for someone, I will definitely sing for my wife because when I get married, I will love her.

The phrase 'when I I will get married' is incorrect; 'when' clauses use present tense, not future tense. Also, 'I love' is incomplete; it should be 'I will love her' or similar.

× I would love so much to my wife and I'll sing for her.

✓ I would love my wife so much and I'll sing for her.

The phrase 'love so much to my wife' is incorrect; the correct order is 'love my wife so much'.

× Whatever I can from the depth of my heart.

✓ Whatever I can, from the depth of my heart.

The sentence is incomplete and missing a verb; adding a comma clarifies the phrase, but ideally it should be 'I will do whatever I can from the depth of my heart.'

× Yes, singing and brings happiness to people because when we sing a song we express our inside immersion with the with the lyrics that that that we can never share with any others.

✓ Yes, singing brings happiness to people because when we sing a song we express our inner emotions with the lyrics that we can never share with others.

The phrase 'singing and brings' is incorrect; 'singing brings' is correct. Also, 'inside immersion' is incorrect; 'inner emotions' is appropriate. 'With the with the' is redundant and should be corrected. 'Any others' should be 'others'.

× In songs, there are some release that you can relate to your feelings with the lyrics.

✓ In songs, there are some releases that you can relate to your feelings through the lyrics.

The word 'release' should be plural 'releases'. The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'through' is appropriate to indicate the medium of relation.