唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有很多语法错误和词汇使用不当，导致表达不清晰。建议你学习正确的动词形式和拼写，避免重复词汇，并且用更自然的表达方式来说明你喜欢唱歌的原因。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it is easy for me and I enjoy singing with my friends. Singing is a good habit that makes me happy.

建議: 你的回答语法混乱，句子不完整，表达不清楚。建议你用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并说明你学习唱歌的经历和原因。

範例: Yes, I learned to sing when I was a child because my teacher wanted me to join a good choir. So I started taking singing lessons.

建議: 你的回答中有很多拼写错误和语法错误，导致意思不明确。建议你用正确的词汇和句子结构表达你想为谁唱歌以及原因。

範例: I want to sing for my parents and friends because they enjoy listening to me. Sometimes we sing together, which is very fun.

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和词汇错误较多，影响理解。建议你用更准确的句子表达唱歌如何带来快乐，并举具体例子。

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. For example, when I have a bad day, singing helps me relax and feel better. Sometimes I sing with my friends, which makes me happy.

× Yes I do, I worry like saying because I think saying is so easy for me and I can saying to to to my friends on my pardons.

✓ Yes I do, I really like singing because I think singing is so easy for me and I can sing to my friends and my parents.

这里'saying'用作动名词时，应该用'singing'表示唱歌的动作。'can'后面应接动词原形'sing'，而不是动名词'saying'。另外，'worry like'应为'really like'，'pardons'应为'parents'。

× Yes, I have a where was a children. I lied and choose saying my teacher to touch me becaused my teacher wants me to enable a good company company.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I liked and chose singing. My teacher taught me because my teacher wanted me to join a good company.

句子中时态混乱，'have a where was a children'应为'when I was a child'，'lied'应为'liked'，'choose'应为'chose'，均为过去式。'becaused'应为'because'。动词时态应保持一致。

× So I learn to say.

✓ So I learned to sing.

'learn'的过去式是'learned'，'say'应为'sing'，表示唱歌。

× I want to sing for my pardons or my friends be 'cause my partners want to say like 2 amazing and my partners.

✓ I want to sing for my parents or my friends because my partners want to sing like two amazing singers and my partners.

'pardons'应为'parents'，'be 'cause'应为'because'，'partners'应保持一致，'say'应为'sing'。数字'2'应写为'two'。

× Allowed to saying we can saying together.

✓ Allowed to sing, we can sing together.

'allowed to'后应接动词原形'sing'，而不是动名词'saying'。

× For example, why have a note good day, I want to sing for myself and sometimes my friends are allowed to, saying it is kinda relax for me and can bring happiness to me.

✓ For example, when I have a not good day, I want to sing for myself and sometimes my friends are allowed to sing. It is kind of relaxing for me and can bring happiness to me.

'why have a note good day'应为'when I have a not good day'，'allowed to, saying'应为'allowed to sing'，'kinda relax'应为'kind of relaxing'，形容词应改为现在分词形式作表语。