唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and connect your ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy and clarify your points clearly.

範例: I don't really like singing because my parents always told me that my singing voice was horrible. This made me afraid to sing during my childhood, so I don't often sing now.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases. Focus on giving a clear and direct response with proper sentence structure. Avoid unnecessary words and correct vocabulary mistakes.

範例: I have never learned how to sing, which might explain why my singing is not very good. However, I hope to take singing lessons in the future to improve my skills.

建議: Your answer has many grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Use complete sentences and correct vocabulary. Also, explain your ideas clearly and logically.

範例: I would like to sing for my girlfriend at our wedding party because I believe singing for loved ones is one of the most romantic things in the world.

建議: Your answer is confusing and difficult to understand. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

範例: I believe singing can help people recover from sadness and make them feel happy, especially when they sing cheerful songs instead of sad ones.

× I don't really like singing because.

✓ I don't really like singing because my parents always told me that my singing voice is horrible.

The sentence 'I don't really like singing because.' is incomplete and ends abruptly, causing a sentence structure error. It should be connected to the reason to form a complete sentence.

× During my childhood days made me afraid of singing.

✓ During my childhood days, I was afraid of singing.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I was' corrects the sentence structure.

× Therefore I don't often sing.

✓ Therefore, I don't often sing.

A comma is needed after 'Therefore' to separate the introductory adverb from the main clause, improving clarity.

× I have never learned how to sing.

✓ I have never learnt how to sing.

Both 'learned' and 'learnt' are correct past participles of 'learn'. However, 'learnt' is more common in British English, which fits the context better.

× Perhaps this is the reason of my terrible singing focals.

✓ Perhaps this is the reason for my terrible singing vocals.

The correct preposition after 'reason' is 'for', not 'of'. Also, 'focals' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'vocals'.

× Until the owner.

This fragment 'Until the owner.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be removed or completed to make sense.

× Sorry, I think I have a poor singing skill and I hope to learn how to sing in the future.

✓ Sorry, I think I have poor singing skills and I hope to learn how to sing in the future.

'Skill' should be plural 'skills' because singing ability is generally referred to in plural form. Also, 'a poor singing skill' is unnatural.

× I really wanna sing for my girlfriend doing during our wedding party.

✓ I really want to sing for my girlfriend during our wedding party.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. 'Doing during' is incorrect; 'during' alone suffices.

× Because I always think that singing for our beloved ones system most romantic.

✓ I always think that singing for our beloved ones is the most romantic thing.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' here creates a fragment. Also, 'system' is incorrect; it should be 'is the'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× On stuff in the world.

This fragment 'On stuff in the world.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be removed or completed to make sense.

× I always think that singing can bring everyone recovering from the tragic San, making them feel glad, but of course they need to sing happy songs instead of theirs.

✓ I always think that singing can help everyone recover from tragic sadness, making them feel glad, but of course they need to sing happy songs instead of sad ones.

The original sentence has several errors: 'bring everyone recovering' is incorrect; it should be 'help everyone recover'. 'Tragic San' is unclear and likely a typo for 'tragic sadness'. 'Instead of theirs' is incorrect; it should be 'instead of sad ones'.

× Tip breaking up. Breaking up.

These fragments 'Tip breaking up. Breaking up.' are unclear and incomplete. They should be removed or clarified.