唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and recharge after a long day at school. For example, I often sing alone when I'm in a good mood, which really lifts my spirits.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai.

範例: Honestly, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons before. I usually sing along with the melody, but sometimes I watch YouTube videos to improve my singing skills.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời dùng từ nối để liên kết ý.

範例: I want to sing with my older sister because she wouldn't judge me. We can spend quality time together, which makes singing more enjoyable. However, I don't like singing in front of a large audience.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "um" và sắp xếp câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it makes them feel joyful. For example, during karaoke sessions or concerts, people sing together and share happiness with everyone in the crowd.

× Of course, enjoy singing, you know it helps me relax an. Recharge batteries after a long day of school or something like that.

✓ Of course, I enjoy singing, you know it helps me relax and recharge my batteries after a long day of school or something like that.

The original sentence lacks a subject 'I' before 'enjoy singing', and 'an.' is a typo for 'and'. Also, 'Recharge batteries' is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the previous clause. The correction adds the subject and connects the ideas properly to form a complete sentence.

× For example I. Enjoy singing alone when I'm in a good mood.

✓ For example, I enjoy singing alone when I'm in a good mood.

The original sentence incorrectly splits 'I.' and 'Enjoy' into two parts, creating a sentence fragment. The correction combines them into one sentence and adds a comma after 'For example' for clarity.

× It's really lips up my speech.

✓ It really lifts up my spirits.

The phrase 'lips up my speech' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'lifts up my spirits' meaning it makes the speaker feel better. The correction replaces the incorrect phrase with the appropriate idiomatic expression.

× Honestly, it I haven't learned of formal. Singing lessons Before I just sing with the flows or with flow with the melody.

✓ Honestly, I haven't learned any formal singing lessons before. I just sing with the flow or follow the melody.

The original sentence has misplaced words and fragments such as 'it I haven't learned of formal.' and 'Before I just sing with the flows or with flow with the melody.' The correction rearranges the sentence to proper structure and corrects 'flows' to 'flow' and 'with flow with the melody' to 'follow the melody' for clarity.

× But sometimes I try to watch some YouTube videos an improve my singing voice.

✓ But sometimes I try to watch some YouTube videos and improve my singing voice.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to correctly connect the two actions. The correction fixes this conjunction error.

× Yeah, actually it is my I want to sing with my older sister.

✓ Yeah, actually, I want to sing with my older sister.

The phrase 'it is my I want to sing' is ungrammatical and confusing. The correction removes unnecessary words to form a clear sentence.

× She wouldn't judge me in We all spend that quality time with each other.

✓ She wouldn't judge me and we all spend quality time with each other.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'in' and capitalizes 'We' improperly, causing confusion. The correction replaces 'in' with 'and' to connect the ideas and uses lowercase 'we' to maintain sentence flow.

× Yeah, I think so. An. I have a look. I don't want to sing in front of the ground in source.

✓ Yeah, I think so. And I have a look. I don't want to sing in front of the crowd in public.

The original sentence has fragmented parts like 'An. I have a look.' and 'ground in source' which are unclear. The correction changes 'An.' to 'And', 'ground' to 'crowd', and 'in source' to 'in public' to make the sentence meaningful.

× Honestly, yes, UM, singing can bring happiness to people and the and they can feel joyful and for example, like in the karaoke or and the concerts, people can sing together and bring that happiness for everyone in the crowd.

✓ Honestly, yes, singing can bring happiness to people and they can feel joyful. For example, in karaoke or concerts, people can sing together and bring happiness to everyone in the crowd.

The original sentence has redundant conjunctions like 'and the and' and awkward phrasing. The correction removes unnecessary words, splits the sentence for clarity, and improves flow.