唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide a brief reason. For example, say "No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing abilities."

範例: No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing abilities. I usually avoid singing in public since I feel I am not very good at it.

建議: Make your answer more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Start with a direct response and then explain briefly. For example, "No, I have never learned how to sing because I lack confidence in my voice."

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I lack confidence in my voice. I haven't taken any singing lessons or training.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts clearly with linking words. For example, "Although I'm not a good singer, if I have the chance, I would like to sing for my family because singing is a tradition during our family gatherings."

範例: Although I'm not a good singer, if I have the chance, I would like to sing for my family because singing is a tradition during our family gatherings. It always brings us closer and makes me feel happy.

建議: Improve clarity and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, I believe singing definitely brings happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and emotions. For instance, many people sing while taking a shower or driving."

範例: Yes, I believe singing definitely brings happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and emotions. For example, many people enjoy singing while taking a shower or driving, which helps them relax and feel joyful.

× No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident on my singing abilities as I'm not. Good singer.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing abilities as I'm not a good singer.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to express confidence about something is 'in'. Also, 'Good singer' is a fragment and should be connected properly with an article 'a' to form 'a good singer'.

× No, I haven't done how to sing because I am not confident about on my voice and I'm not confident on my singing ability.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I am not confident about my voice and I'm not confident in my singing ability.

The phrase 'haven't done how to sing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'haven't learned how to sing'. Also, 'about on' is incorrect; it should be just 'about'. Additionally, 'confident on' should be 'confident in'.

× My thing is not good, but if I get caught up for Trinity, I would like definitely sing for my family 'cause it is a tradition in my family to sing. Gathering. And I feel good if I get disability.

✓ My singing is not good, but if I get accepted for Trinity, I would definitely like to sing for my family because it is a tradition in my family to sing at gatherings. And I would feel good if I get a disability award.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues and unclear phrases. 'My thing is not good' is vague; 'My singing is not good' is clearer. 'Get caught up for Trinity' is incorrect; 'get accepted for Trinity' is appropriate. 'I would like definitely sing' should be 'I would definitely like to sing'. 'Cause' should be 'because'. 'Gathering' should be 'gatherings' and connected properly. The last sentence is unclear; assuming 'disability' is a mishearing or typo, 'disability award' or similar is more logical. Overall, the sentence needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I believe singing and definitely bring happiness to people. Singing allows any widgets WordPress their feelings and emotion. Sometimes people sing the songs while they're while they take shower or while they are driving the car.

✓ Yes, I believe singing definitely brings happiness to people. Singing allows anyone to express their feelings and emotions. Sometimes people sing songs while they take a shower or while they are driving a car.

The original sentence has several issues: 'and definitely bring' should be 'definitely brings' to agree with singular subject 'singing' (subject-verb agreement). 'Allows any widgets WordPress their feelings and emotion' is nonsensical; it should be 'allows anyone to express their feelings and emotions'. 'Sing the songs' should be 'sing songs' (no article needed). 'While they're while they take shower' is redundant and incorrect; 'while they take a shower' is correct. 'Driving the car' should be 'driving a car' unless referring to a specific car.