唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add a supporting detail. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, start with 'No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult to carry a tune. However, I enjoy listening to music.'

範例: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult to carry a tune. However, I enjoy listening to music, which helps me relax after a long day.

建議: Your answer is too short and sounds a bit abrupt. Try to give a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add a brief explanation. For example, 'No, I have never learnt how to sing because I find it challenging.'

範例: No, I have never learnt how to sing because I find it challenging and I prefer listening to music instead.

建議: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and incomplete. Try to combine your ideas into full sentences and use linking words to connect them. For example, 'I would like to sing for my wife because she finds it very attractive. That's why I tried to learn singing, but unfortunately, it didn't work out.'

範例: I would like to sing for my wife because she finds it very attractive. That's why I tried to learn singing, but unfortunately, it didn't work out.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain your opinion. For example, 'Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness if the singer performs well and chooses a good song. However, if the singing is poor, it might not have the same effect. Overall, it depends on the song, the singer, and the mood.'

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness if the singer performs well and chooses a good song. However, if the singing is poor, it might not have the same effect. Overall, it depends on the song, the singer, and the mood.

× I literally cannot sing.

✓ I literally cannot sing.

No grammatical error in this sentence related to the present participle form. The verb 'sing' is correctly used in its base form after the modal verb 'cannot'. No correction needed.

× I tried also but there is just something that does not work for me.

✓ I also tried but there is just something that does not work for me.

The placement of 'also' is awkward. 'Also' should come before the verb 'tried' to maintain natural English word order. The past tense 'tried' is correct here.

× I just said no.

✓ I just said no.

The sentence is grammatically correct in past tense. No correction needed.

× Because she thinks it's very sexy.

✓ She thinks it's very sexy.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' without completing the thought creates a sentence fragment. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased as a complete sentence.

× Which is the reason I tried to learn singing, but that did not work out for me.

✓ That is the reason I tried to learn singing, but it did not work out for me.

Starting a sentence with 'Which' here creates a fragment. It should be replaced with 'That is' to form a complete sentence.

× So I just don't think.

✓ So I just don't think so.

The phrase 'I just don't think' is incomplete. Adding 'so' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes I think singing can bring happiness if the person who's singing is actually sing a good song then.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness if the person who's singing actually sings a good song.

The verb 'sing' should be in third person singular present tense 'sings' to agree with the subject 'person'. Also, 'then' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× But if if he or she is saying like **** then I I don't think that will work.

✓ But if he or she is singing like **** then I don't think that will work.

The verb 'saying' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' to match the context. Also, duplicate 'if' and 'I' are removed for clarity.

× So it depends.

✓ So, it depends.

Adding a comma after 'So' improves readability but the sentence is acceptable as is.

× Like what song, who singing, how he's saying, how he or she is saying?

✓ Like what song, who is singing, how he is singing, how he or she is singing?

The phrase 'who singing' is missing the auxiliary verb 'is'. Also, 'how he's saying' should be 'how he is singing' to maintain consistency and correct verb usage.